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The Light's Refrain 2/2/10 . chapter 1
...You know, in your profile you state to avoid all stuff before 2004. And yet I enjoy your Pokemon stories immensely, probably because they have such original plots.

Yeah, Brock being part of Team Rocket is highly unlikely (downright impossible really). But the way you write him in this story, it's believable. That's a feat, and it shows your skill. It's nice how you have him get attached to Ash, and yet he never just ditches Team Rocket for his sake. Oh, and I thought Tracey being his replacement was well done (and funny too: Tracey, a Rocket member, and the fact that Ash is always under observance).

Cya!
Paosheep 4/19/07 . chapter 1
Intriguing... and almost convincing. I like it.
Lori 1/1/05 . chapter 1
So... how does this story end?
Farla 7/19/01 . chapter 1
cool fic! Never thought of Brock as a TR spy before!
Readasaur 5/27/01 . chapter 1
May this reality stay only in the fantasy of your mind, Shadowcat.
Tani Barton 2/22/01 . chapter 1
Now that I would never have thought of. Brock as a rocket agent. Well, it's possible. Makes sense in a strange sort of way, at least to my mind. Very nice. Explains why Brock decided to leave Ash and Misty after all that time. I like it. And I love the communications to the Rocket base. That's cool.
AshyGurl 1/1/01 . chapter 1
Okay, that just sucked. No offence or anything, but, still... I just don't think that Brock would do that.
Insane Icon Simon X 11/3/00 . chapter 1
Yo Shads, I likes it! And I bet Ashyboy would never realise that is because he's soo stupid.
Hino 10/28/00 . chapter 1
Lol! That was really good; I love fics that make you think thingsd aren't quite what they seem - it's like the 6th SEnse - the movie, I mean - kind of. You think something might be a certain way but aren't sure till the very end. . what am I talking about? I dunno. 4/5
Kinrowan 10/14/00 . chapter 1
This actually makes a weird kind of sense. Keep up the good work. BTW, have you considered doing a sequel with Tracey as the interloper?
DitzyPixy 8/30/00 . chapter 1
VERY ORIGINAL! Me likes!
Bob MUG 8/6/00 . chapter 1
Fascinating...
Danielle 6/23/00 . chapter 1
LOL! Great story, quite humorous though it also has serious parts... well done. _
Charles RocketBoy 5/25/00 . chapter 1
Cool! I knew there was something wrong with Brock _?
Catie Storm 5/25/00 . chapter 1
Hahaha ... cute.
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