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FallOutGirl272
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Dude, you have to continue this!!
I really want to know what happens next :D
Mimi
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
this is so cute sasuke the daddy oh hope theres a lot of drama here n not by a kids side come on i wanna c some sakura sasuke loving please pretty please!
Strings of a Puppet
2008-04-03 . chapter 1
I'm confused...who's the mommy that got kicked out?

Wha? Why? HUH?!

OH YOU TRICKED ME INTO THINKING SAKURA WAS THE HORRIBLE ABUSER. Hehe. (wipes sweat off forehead)

Me likey this story but you haven't updated it in two years...is there still hope?

(BATTERS EYELASHES AT YOU)
JitterBugx
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Whootnesh! ;D
Cant wait fr nxt chapter!^^
Aweshome job
QuicksilverWitch
2007-10-25 . chapter 1
Great first chapter; this fic really has lots of potential for a super awesome storyline, just like your others XD It was very gut clenching to read the beginning when she was talking about Mother; children don't deserve parents who are cruel to them *solemn nod*

Keep up the great work!
sweet girl
2007-02-11 . chapter 1
hey love the story a lot i wonder who was the mother and i hope it will end with sasuke and sakura r u gonna update
NutBuster
2007-01-14 . chapter 1
Awesome. Tricked me into thinking it was Sakura who was abusive. Lol. Poor Ai~

Can't wait for your update!
Blizzie-chan
2006-12-23 . chapter 1
Oh this is a great start! Already Sasuke has kids. Hmm, I wonder who that abusive mommy was. I'm just glad Sakura is coming back! Yay! Update soon, I'll gladly be waiting for your next chapter.
emeraldoni
2006-10-12 . chapter 1
Are you going to continue with this? Maybe just one mroe chapter, or something? PLease?
I really loved this, though it was sad. For a second, I worried that Sakura was the mom, but then i knew that would be impossible. I would have to kil the person who wrote her liek that without and enormously good reason. I truly do wish to see what happens next though.
Please?
Thanks for sharing...
~emeraldoni
Imeralt Evalon
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
This sounds good, hopefully you will continue.
serpentslayer
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
nice so far...can't wait for the next chapter! *^ ^*
hn what?
2006-05-19 . chapter 1
i love it so far! are you going to update it soon?
paper jam
2006-04-13 . chapter 1
I have a vague idea of what's going on here, or something like that. Sakura's their mother right? That's why Sasuke's first wife abused them, because they weren't her children. And considering the summary... maybe Sasuke made off with their children? @_@ Though it can be plausible right? You never mentioned what the children's eye color or hair color were so... yeah. I'm so very confused right now.

I just realized that you wrote some of the stories that made me fall deeply and madly in love with the Naruto fandom and more with SasuSaku (I was an avid shipper even before I had the chance to read or watch Naruto ;p). Thus, to the favorite authors list you go!

P.S. I'm going to be one of the people who'll flood your inbox with my abundance of reviews (probably). Muhahaha.
=]
2006-03-28 . chapter 1
I'll be keeping a watch out for an update! A good beginning...
can't wait to see the story progress...
misatito
2006-03-17 . chapter 1
oh ho ho ho... I know where this is getting to xD... I hope you update this soon, I really want to know why Sakura leaved Konoha, and whos is the sick mother of those lil' kids...

bye bye!
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