Wow. That's all that there really is to say. I'm not going to lie, this was pretty dark but you wrote everything so amazingly. Every word was written and placed perfectly. It was all so descriptive and it got into the soul of what was going on in the story. This was amazing! Aweseome job! I can't believe that it is only your first one shot! lol Just... wow. Great job!

Jess

Ooh, I liked it. It was pretty dark, I'm not gonna lie, but I've always wondered how Courtney didn't get all depressed after all the crap she'd been through. Aw, why did she push Jason away? Bad Courtney. You wrote this beautifully. Very descriptive, very intense. Good job.