I really liked this :D

Oh! A new ending! I like it! Very nicely done! You stayed true to the characters and the situation. Good job. However, call me anal, but there is one little thing about your writing that bugs me. Her name is B-i-l-l-I-E, not B-i-l-l-Y. Call me anal (and I am) but im really picky about name spellings! Probably because most people don't spell my name right! LOL Great job! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

I know what you mean, the ending to 101 always bugged me too! The problem I think was they (the writers, directors, whoever)were trying so hard to be cool & stylish with them all posing in that circle in the end that they lost sight of the characters. I mean, here Deaq is worried sick about his partner who's thumb is hanging on by a thread, covered with blood and Deaq totally ignores hime. He didn't so much as ask if he was OK or even look concerned. He didn't look at him at all, but yet they were all over Jared. Didn't make sense. Though I did kind of like the scene with Van and Jared at the end, where he thanked him for being his mentor. And that white sweater on Van - yummy! Thanks for setting things right!

I definitely liked that ending much better, even tho I must say 101 is one of my absolute favorite eps. Great job at editing it so that it made a little more sense. I loved the fact that Van got to rip into Jared. And even more that Deaq did too. Great fic!

-DK