Aw!! That was touching! I absolutely loved it. And your writing style is wonderful. You captured both characters very well. Excellent story!

*cry* that was so sad!! *blows nose* this was the best, u didn't kill anyone thank god lol. *gets on knees* PLEASE MAKE MORE! *begs* >.< or another story to this r something I am now one of your bigest fans! AWSOME JOB! WOOT!

That was amazing! it was really sweet at the end

Uh its a good story...

I didnt play warcraft only WoW.

But good nonethless.

I love it I love it.. *clap clap clap* So perfect, there's no other way it could have been written ;3; It's too good... It makes my heart sink, but also makes me happy at the same time ;3;

Wow...magnificent. You get a 10 out of 10. Good job.

Whoa that was amazing *sniffles* I'm a sap for Arthas/Jaina, they're cute D:...

Well written and very realistic... if only...
*thumbs up*

I liked that story, I always thought Arthas was a cool character and I am curious if you are going to do a sequal, I think it would be great. I always wanted to see the corrupted Arthas go good again. Thanks for writing the story.

WOW. 0_o fantastic writing!! This scene is just all too real. In fact, I could already see it playing in my head! Keep writing! ^__^

nice job! although i can see jaina killing arthas, i like the way you wrote the story and she spared him.
blizzard made one HOT bad guy, i mean come on, with a leader like that whod say no to mindless undeath?

Great stuff. Both characters seem IC and the writing is very solid. The only problem I see is an occasional tense switch.

This is really good and also realistic. You are a good writer

A beautiful story, despite the fact that it doesn't completely follow the lore. You presented Arthas' feelings in a great way in my opinion. Good job!