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ElvendorkLuVer
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
LOVELOVELOVELOVE IT!
Sunshine My Love
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
I really loved this story. Kudos to your job and their relationship! :D
The Flower Writer
2008-03-05 . chapter 1
I liked this chapter. It was romantic... in an odd sort of way. You could write a whole story based on this. It is a brilliant building block.
R.L.N.Tonks
2007-12-01 . chapter 1
OMG! Sorry I didn't reveiw sooner, but OMG! I really liked this story. Do you think you can add on?? You know, UNone shot it... but whatever... it's also good leaving off where it is now!
Paige Halliwell
2007-09-05 . chapter 1
Aww, this was brilliant! Well written and very sweet :)
summersgirl2526
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
awesome
P.P.V.V
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
The longer the chapter, the happier I am! Wow, I should get going. Time to teach. ^.^ My students have arrived.

I will be back and I'll make like one of those crazy reviewers and tell you to WRITE MORE ~ for bleeding hearts like mine.

@.@

Gack, the students!
Thanks for writing,
-P.P.V.V.
An Aspiring Author
2007-03-09 . chapter 1
great story! absolutly brilliant! i love stories written in biology, they always seem to come out well (i am also in biology and know what its like), much better than those written in computer class or english... lol!
codswallop
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
that story sent shivers down my spine, it was amazing! iv read a lot of lily/james stories but this is my absolute favourite. all of your other stories are great too but this one really stands out as the best!:)
wenttoloveandback
2006-12-03 . chapter 1
Oh, this was absolutely beautiful. I loved it.
I Want To Give Neville A Hug
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
o very good into my favorites it goes
100-percent-Harry-Potter-obsessed
2006-08-07 . chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic! Going on the favs list!
Malicia
2006-06-23 . chapter 1
ok i almost cry, it was so real, kind of powerful emotionaly (is that a word ? lol) ...really great, i loved it.
Malicia
dance-of-the-butterflies
2006-06-23 . chapter 1
i liked this story so much. i read this on portkey a few months ago and for some reason I couldn't get it out of my head! you're a brilliant writer.
shubs
2006-04-04 . chapter 1
yours stories are great! i hope you keep writting take care.
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