an interesting one-shot. Its strange that Lord Vader didn't pick up the swirls of his genetics through Leia's force signature.

Of course I've always found that odd even in the canon.

Gorgeous!! I hope you're writing more.

Hey the story was great I hope that youwill write more soon. I can't waight to read the nextchapter though I've been wathching star wars for as log as i can remeber It still feels kindda new to me.

Great story!!

Wonderful!!

Jade

Cool story.

I'm sure you meant "dawdle" , not "dwaddle".
I loved Vader's response at Leia's name. Yes, that sort of knee jerk reaction would keep him from recognizing her as his daughter, something I have always found suspect.
I liked the Emperor's focusing" Vader through pain too. Even that early on, he was already making Vader an enemy.
Very good story, Jedi!

Great little scene - poor Leria to have sparked such a surge of temper from Vader. but also how painful to him to be reminded of what he had lost, albeit through his own actions.