._. ...No fair! >:O *takes May's bandana and ties it around her eyes* Of all things, you couldn't take fabreeze with you for the stench? >:O *slaps her* Evil **! *May hands Satoshi some orange tic-tacs* O_e Damnit...stupid...addicting...bastards... *takes the tic-tacs from her and nums them hapily* ^w^

disturbing...

That was the first depressing story since i signed up !!

It wasn't too bad.

Definitely not what i had expected.

Poor Ash.

Wow, that was incredibly dark and disturbing, yet an amazing story!

What the...ARE YOU MAD!?Your a boy right?
scary, creepy, wierd, ..um..,idiotic--
Pikachu:Pika pi?
I-I thought you were dead!
Misty:Is she next May?
Dawn:I think so?
May:Yup!
-Misty throws a knife at me-
Well my comment for that is 'ouch'And you three are next
(How can a killer kill another killer?)=^^=
'Ja shinde?'

muhaha..ha...ha? Surprisingly satisfying and depressing at the same time. o.0

Very cool, very creepy. Gotta love killing Ash, and you're torutring him on top of it! Poor guy, you never fall for a girl that easy because, odds are, she's a psychopath.
Poor Pikachu though...
Nicely written!

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(face pales) dude that was creepy as hell man. but suprisingly good keep up the good work man.

plz continue this story i m begging you plz make it a multichapter story please with the same amount of darkness like in your other stories.make something like may tortures ash and hes close to dying but at the last moment may tells ash how attractive he is

hey man good story especially where ash is the story its great and add something that ash is tortured but after convincing may becomes her lover

Wow. Just wow. I wasn't expecting this at all. You have a fantastic talent at writing; this was some of the best fanfiction that I've read. You have an amazing ability here. Please, don't ever let it go to waste!

WOW

i love it needs a series abuot may

jezz christ man you got to have a really brilliant and sick mind for this stuff man.. HAHha man...jeez christ but thanks...you make me scared of girls now.