really cute and well written story. i really laughed outloud at the part about angel choking on a whole wheat flake. totally hysterical!

great job!

Groan, can I steal your brain? You are entirely too good at writing Mo/Jo fluff. That image of Angel choking on a whole-wheat flake...too hilarious for words.

Love and happy thoughts

entirely too cute...loved loved loved it! i love mo/jo fluff...please write more :)

I never get tired of stories that make Maureen and Joanne happy. Very good job. A

This was fantastic. I am in love with it. I really loved your characterization. Cute :)

Short and sweet, the right amount of action for its length, and good insight into character relationships. The first sentence is intriguing, and I like how Maureen's POV is handled. I think "deft" is the right word. And "cute." A perfect one-shot