ehehe.. yeah Athrun.. that was chEesy..

"are you a driver? 'coz you're driving me crazy.."

"are you a keyboard? 'cause your one of my types.."

"it must've hurt, huh? when you feLL from heaven.."

"are you faLse teEth? I can't smiLe without you.."

"aren't you getting tired? you've aLways bEen running in my mind.."

"are you LoneLy? 'cause you're the onLy one in my heart.."

"I'd Let them shoOt me anywhere.. except at my heart.. 'cause that's where you are.."

"my pants are uncomfortabLe.. but my bed is.."

man! aLL the corniest stuFf my imouto-chan's bEen saying after reading this fic.. *shrugs*

nyWeiZ, it was fun reading it.. ^^

hahhahaha bad pick up line athrun! hehe
ew still, i like it hehe

"Oh my God, the Bend and Snap! Works every time!" ;)

Short and sweet. I like it.

Loved the idea...

~asucaga forever~

(= Horny. Hilarious. Fantastic. Why don't you continue instead of making it a oneshot? xD

I loved it, good job with the pick-up lines. I'm trying to pick a guy up myself, though he isn't really noticing me. Anyway, well done!

nice one-shot!

:maeye:

lol a cute and nice one shot :)

Nice! Funny lol