Good story, well done.

*Gasps* Dear God...Ghost children...Keitaro you player. Still does that make the children Zombies? Human Kitsune/Kanako + Dead Keitaro = Zombie brats...or at least kids that can fly, Go through walls, and talk to fat Elvis.
Whatever, this has got my interest. But do I have to wait a month for the next chapter?
In any case Read ya Later.

LOL, NICE!

ikari shinji

-blinks- What the? Hoo boy what a doozy you've left us with. I'm most intrigued and wanna see how this one unfolds, that I do ;)

Great story. Rather interesting plot line. Update soon =)

An interesting premise you've got going on here - especially since it's set so far in the future. I would suggest, however, that you get a good pre-reader to help polish this up a bit. There's a lot of missing and incorrectly used words and bad punctuation, plus some unrealistic and cheesy dialogue.

If you're interested, I would be more than happy to help with this, since I think it's an interesting idea and I want to see where it's going to go. E-mail or message me if you want a hand.

-Random

Interesting way to hatch a Keitaro/Kitsune pairing, of course the fact that Keitaro is *dead* kinda puts a damper on things unless you have something REALLY interesting planned. Awaiting next chapter eagerly to find out what that is.