I like it! lol

hehe lol little lucius...lol. cute XD

O.o Guess I should read the one before this. It seems like you used *'s for actions or something, but they get removed, so it turned out like "more rustling, Severus grunts I nearly lost you. I will not apologize for needing to reaffirm that you are all right, and that you are still mine. Severus gasps Now, hold still, and let me ravish you." It looks weird, and it makes it a little hard to read. Anyway, this is quite interesting.

Nice to know that they can appreciate love, or at least, good lovin!