   zexydemyx66 11/3/11 . chapter 1Hehe. Please write more. |
| britt 12/20/10 . chapter 1 The ending is sooo messed up. |
| Lady Vectress 6/28/10 . chapter 1 Oh, nice way to end the story dude! I love'd the fic until the end... But it's still good! :) |
| KH2Gurl2006 5/7/06 . chapter 1 It was okay...you need to make the chapters longer...and you need more Sephiroth! |
| jazzybutclassy28 3/30/06 . chapter 1 it is kinda short. but please continue |
| Tolling 3/7/06 . chapter 1 Oh,pretty good!I like it.ja mei,its good!
-Tolea |
| Radical Ecstasy 3/6/06 . chapter 1 Alittle short and kind of had a pointlessness to it, but I liked it. |
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