Wow.

V. nice. On a more technical note, the semi-colon brought me such joy. Thank you!

Well, that's creepy. But probably what you were going for, isn't it? Interesting thoughts here.

I think you underestimate your drabble-writing prowess, because this is great. A perfect 100 words and OH. The last line packs a punch.

Also admirable is your skilled, clean portrait of the Irken mindset, as creatures that are so potentially loathesome because they don't loathe things but destroy them anyway. There's something unrecognizable and scary about a type of mind that does that... something truly alien. If a creature despises what it kills, it's not admirable, but at least we can relate to that... this is just beyond ken.

Nice, nice, nice. I adore it!

hmm interesting

Interesting

I loved this. It made me think of the Irken way. You truly explored what their task was and why the Irkens performed it, creating iit beautifully and poetically in a perfect drabble. Keep writing more!

Crepy. You've definitely got talent.

This was beautiful. I love how you were able to say so much in so few words. I hope to be able to write as well as you one day. ^^

Also, you're profile is beautifuly written. Congradradulations, you are now on my Favorite Authors list. :) Thank you so much for writing these wonderful works for us aspiring authors to study and learn from.

-Keckhs

That's a zinger. Real food for thought. Keeping it at 100 words seems very Irken in itself.

nice! i liked how something so short held so much meaning. very good concept :)

wow that was deep. Very good ^^