I'm a little confused but i like the story please continue but who's point of view is the story told from?

-insert new reviewer-

Hey got a awesome story here. Yes I agree the last part of this chapter amused me too. Will be waiting for more.

haha omg that last chapter cracked me up!
detention definately in order :P

yay! an update! 8D

haha the way you ended the chapter is funny XD

I would be sweet when Shizuru meet Natsuki, both character will grow together, melting each other's heart.
I like the 'rumor'...it makes Natsuki an interesting figure by far :P

wait whos the phycho

this is actually an interesting story, XD i enjoyed reading it, it has a lot of mystery in it, and a lot of blank spaces.

uh, it wouldn't be to much to hope that your going to be updating this fiction after 2 years is it? XD;;

I don't understand why this story has so few reviews. It was very enjoyable. I particularly liked how disjointed it was. It reminds me of the way we remember our memories" bits and pieces, only the things we think are important. Well, even if it's incomplete, I still really liked it. :)

Ah...okay. I want this to get updated. Very badly. And since I can't think why I forgot to review, I'll do it now. This is good. Very good. Exploring simularities while maintaining those much-loved differences is challenging enough, but to keep that up while giving us a plot-that's-not (emotion, but no action, not that I mind), backstory that's more in the foreground, and have nothing really happen that makes it seem as if everything and anything will is one heck of a job, and you're pulling it off wonderfully. So...yeah. In short, it's good. Please update? Consider updating? I'll wait with metaphorically baited breath.
~Naolin

whats wrong did you stopped writing? please not i want to know how this story continues^^ (so take this as a reminder review...hope the word is correct me and my english XD )

*blinks a couple times*

I'm not sure if you've gotten characters mixed up or if you made up names or what... I've seen Mai HiME and I don't remember much when it comes to last names, so I might just be a dork.

Who has a little sister @_@? I can't figure it out. It seems like Natsuki magically got parents and a little sister...

Shizuru is actually pretty interesting in this, then again, I might have gotten confused again.

I KNOW you spoke about Nao. That's for sure, but then it blended with someone else.

So yeah, those were all my impressions. I'm going to think for a little while now and look for last names >_>

Great chapter. The only complaint I have is it's too short.
Update soon!!

Another excellent work.
Update soon!!

Hmm.

This is actually rather interesting, except...I got a little confused. In the beginning, that is. From the way things had been portrayed, I had been pretty sure it was Shizuru we are talking about -- except, of course, her personality seems to have some big...changes.

Still, though, the first three sentences was pretty misleading. That's how I thought we were looking at things through Shizuru's POV. I didn't realize it was actually Natsuki until the last part -- where the girl introduced herself as Shizuru.

But, either way...there seems to be a drastic change in personality. Although, you did have nailed down the reason for the change in an interesting way, so I won't bank in on that.

Now, chapter 2. I liked your vague interpretations, and it isn't too long at all. ^_^

One thing, though: "She never woke and she hated her for it."

Her as in herself or the other?

Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm keeping tabs on this. =)

-Eagle

I don't mind short chapters. Update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.