Poor Hannibal. Face being shot has to be one of his worst nightmares. If not his worst. He cares for all of his team but he always seems to get so much more agitated when it happens to Face. Emotions are dead on. Nicely done.

So nicely written. Flowed well, diction is perfect. I enjoyed it.

Very intense!

Nice - like the MacBeth/washing concept and the constant reference to colour. You really manage to portray Hannibal's sorrow and frustration.

THANKS!

i like this piece please add more to it, there is so much that can be done.

Short, but excellent. Excellent.

hiya!
nice story, but way too short!
like your writing style.