ok, you asked what i like better... kakashi gettin chewed out or his ** kicked... damn thats a touch one... i'd say both, due to the fact that he needed an ** kicking plus to be severily chewed out for half the ** he's done... but other that that i don't know... lol

nice fic you got going... keep up the good work... if you don't i'll kick your **... i know where you live... LOL...ROFL

I think that the people on FF had to give some cash to you to stay here, we are having a professional writter making stories for us for FREE! OH MY GOSH!xD .

This story was good, brilliant! You time your fic very well, i dont had one boring moment reading it, and your fights scenes... tsk tsk...WERE AWESOME! *something explodes*
I dont know why here and there on some of your fics you say that you suck in battle scenes, you writte and time them perfectly and knows the right moment to stop at least in my opinion(yup some authors can make 2-3 chaps on the same fight...think about DragoonballZ...) If you still have space for one more compliment, omg Demom lord Naruto and friendly Kyubii! You made my day with this one, i will stop reading manga now and only read your fics!

Yes, there are a lot of spelling errors in this story, but I really do like your story. I think the jutsu Anko used was called something like this: ''Shadow Snake Hands''

This was a very very good fanfic. I also think the way you started it off would be his worst fear and biggest weakness. While I know spelling and grammer is impormnet I also have alot of trouble with it. I would recomed you find some one to help with it (I have my wife) only becouse many people that would like your story will skip it becouse of it. It also makes getting your point across better.

I think this story has one of the best ways for some of the vilins to be realy good guy with still folloing the beging of the show. Good Job

this was simply eppic.
the short chapters in the start was a little (only a little) annoying but aside from that this story was awesome.

yay! awesome

AH!i love this story!i stayed up really late last night trying to finish it it was so good!

nice fic...but after reading ur other fics this looks very amaturish...but since this was ur first fic i guess that was to be expected. Hope you write another Naruto/Sakura fic in future thou not one in which they immediately fall in love. Am off to reading your other work. So keep writing.

i luv it i luv it i luv it

Was one of the first fics I read and I must say that after all this time it's still one of my favorites! Dramatic, Suspenseful, Romantic, and still some how joyous, this is a fic of a truely high stature! Good Job!

PS: A sequel would be awesome!

i knew it. I thought it was anko from the previous chapters, and this confirms it!

Though i like the idea of naruto returning Konoha ! I hate the faq that you made the summoner and summon look stupid ... that would never happen .. Overall I like it just that point was bugging me !!

What in the world just happen ? I thought Mizuki was close with naruto and killing him just like that in one chapter is too ... I don't know !_!' (too quick)?

what a great story

amazing! just to let you know from what ive read the consensus is that its Itachi who has an unnatural fixation on pocky not kisame. kisame i believe likes sushi.