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| i love athrun 2006-07-26 ch 4,  | abuseIT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER! |
| bigguy1234 2006-07-23 ch 4, | abusegreat story keep going its is very interest can't wait for the next chapter to be posted and find out what asuka is planning to do to shinji |
| marduk-report 2006-07-22 ch 4, | abusearghh, the chapters, they are so short... theyre pretty good though, but i feel sorry for kana-super sensitive hearing? ouch, if i had that id be crying out for mercy just cos someone walked along the pavement "the noise! THE NOISE!" |
| marduk-report 2006-07-22 ch 2, | abuseTHANK GOD you ended the presence of gundams at ch one...THANK YOU. good chapter |
| marduk-report 2006-07-22 ch 1, | abusei get the feeling this is gonna be another fic where gundams are considered to be more than just bantha poodoo-which is a shame as this fic is very well written |
| Necrokon 2006-07-22 ch 4, | abuseThis story is really great. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really like the part when Shinji stood up to Asuka, but if you want an idea, I've got one. You can change this chapter by putting in that Asuka trips while walking away from Shinji and he saves her from falling. Then they look deeply into each other's eyes and you have a really romantic moment. |
| Shinji Ikari01 2006-07-21 ch 4, | abusecontinue |
| Frost-EVA-04 2006-07-21 ch 4, | abuseOk, that was good. Now, KEEP UPDATING. That was way too long of a wait for that short of a chapter. Please update soon. I can't wait for the romance and Kana's other abilities to surface. Keep it up. Frost out. |
| Forever Rahhel 2006-07-21 ch 4, | abuseI fyou are late again I am forced to give you a nudgie. That was nice hope Shinji keeps that attitude. Keep it up. |
| Necrokon 2006-07-12 ch 3, | abuseI like this story. It was a little boring at first, but now it's getting interesting. Can you have Kana help Shinji and Asuka to start dating or something. Keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Frost-EVA-04 2006-03-12 ch 3, | abuseHey I don't know your personality so if you put it on her it will seem like a completly new character. Any way keep up the good work. I'd like to see what happens next, espeacially these other 'enhancements' Kana was talking about. |
| Forever Rahhel 2006-03-12 ch 3, | abuseIt's good to see that Kana is spicing things up, so keep going. It's kinda strange, that Shinji didn't offer his bed to Kana. Is it, because he is developing a spine? |
| Frost-EVA-04 2006-03-10 ch 2, | abuseKeep it coming. She should like piloting an EVA more because she doesn't get thrown around so much. Also, I thought she was 18. She shouldn't have to stay with Misato. Well it's your story. Do what you want. I can't wait to see what Shinji does when he finds out he has a sister. Keep up the good work. |
| Forever Rahhel 2006-03-10 ch 2, | abuseIt's good to hear about the SxA stuff. Kana is sure an interesting ACC. I wonder about the mental state of the others and how they will change, when she makes her entrance. |
| Forever Rahhel 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI like the style of your writting. As long as Shinji and Asuka R not together from the beginning it should be a promising story. On the other hand Kana could mess up with their feeling, when they R together from the start, so I'm certain this will be quiet entertaining. |