Elena's so cool!! love it! oh yeah i hope that you'll turn this to an EleRen (Elena/Reno) pleeezee???
write more!

very good! Write more!! I wanna see the reactions from the other Turks!

*thumbs ups* Hey, that's pretty durn good. I'm glad to see something really worth reading here, as most people haven't mastered the art of spelling and punctuation yet. ^_^ But honestly, I liked it and I hope you'll continue -- your portrayal of Elena is really very nice. I'll bet I couldn't do it if I tried. I kind of like Elena weepy. Someone's got to be weepy.

i like how you portay elena. update soon!

wow, you're good! I really like this idea; when you think of the ditzy things elena says and does it puts a whole new slant on her actions...nice! And I have to say, my brother is (I think) the only Heidegger fan in the world and he was quite upset by the snide remark about the big greenie's fashion sense, so good work there! And one comment from the rabid Tseng-fan: I REALLY like your portrayal of him here - keep it up and keep him as a main character please!

Heeey! Keep up the great work ^-^ I love it so far, and the way you portray her character and such is wonderful!! This is one of the very few good Reno/Elena fics there are out there....Well, hope to see more soon! heheeee

I luv the story so far! I always did wonder how Elena got into the Turks. I had one idea that maybe they couldn't find anybody else to cover for Reno when he was injured, but i got tired of it. This is **far** more **interesting** then my idea. Post the next chapter soon, aite? I love the way you portrayed Elena and Tseng. Can't wait for Reno and Rude. Although in the game, IMHO, her rookie 'aura' and ditziness seemed kinda real to me. (Not that she's a ditz or anything. ^_^;; She's my 2nd fav. Turk!) Tseng....? He could have probobly been testing her. Maybe he'll be extra extra ** her then start to like her and ease off or whatever. Sue me, I'm a Elena/Tseng shipper. Either way I'm sticking with this story. ^_^

I liked. I'm waitin for the next chapter ^^

Good Characterization. I don't think Tseng would have been caught off-guard either, but maybe he wasn't. He might have been testing to see what she was capable of, and he probably had some sort of weapon hidden up his sleeve like the one she Elena. After all, he sounded like he knew a lot about that type of weapon.

I like! I like! I was a little shocked to read about Tseng's approach on Elena, but in my opinion I think it explained a LOT. I don't think he'd be the type to sleep with a woman who hadn't been in the office for 5 minutes, but maybe he was just trying to intimidate her. After all, he IS an assassin! Very cool chapter, are you planning on writing another chapter or story? Oh wells, whatever you do, I hope to read it!

*squeals* This is so COOL! I love the way you portrayed Elena! Oooh, I so want to write a fic that centers the Turks. Why don't I? *goes off rambling*

hey, this is good. Sorry, but I suck at pointing out things, so I'll just tell you that I liked this a lot. And I hope you will continue to have Tseng in a major role for the rest of the story.

Howdly-doodly etc. it's me again. Hurry up and write more!

This is good! ^^

Howdly-doodly, Inarae! I like your story so write more soon.