This is even better than the first! Usually, sequels don't live up to the first or just stink (TMNT 3, Neverending Story 3), but sometimes, sequels can be even better than the first, and this is one of those sequels! I think that, if Nintendo allowed it, you should make two movies, one based on the first story and one based on the second one. I swear, I feel like I'm reading a very good script! Keep up the great work!

This is certainly one of the best stories I've read on this site. You really have a talent for storytelling. I guess the only thing negative I could say would be at times I had some trouble understanding who was saying what. Other than that, I think you did a fantastic job. I'll go as far as to say that if a Zelda movie was ever made, I would want it to be based off of your stories, both Zelda I and II. Good work.

This story was very fun to read. Normally I'm not that interested in direct sequel fanfics but this has definitely been an exception. Good job!

Love the story but what happened to Epona . I must know! Great plot!

Love the beginning

Nicely written. I love the "I am Error" reference and of course, the cartoon one. I already told you what I found wrong, so I won't bother to write them here... That and this way, maybe no one will notice... /shifty eyes. I'll try to get the next three chaps beta'd for you soon.

Very good. I like how you changed those grammatically questionable spots. Everything flows really well. Looking forward to the next one!

Thank you for updating again, it´s been quite some time. Not that I blame you, of course.
I´m afraid that in order to do the chapter justice, I´d have to read the whole story again, since much of the plot so far has been so long ago. Once again, I do not blame you, but I hope the next chapter will follow any time soon.

Very nice, though I thought the fight with the Shadow could have been longer and more meaningful, like a true test of self... or something.

Question! If Link has barely been given the Triforce of Courage, then what about Zelda? It would be kinda odd for The Triforce of Power and the Triforce of Courage to be within the weilder, and not the Triforce of Wisdom... Just a thought.

Still, really good chapter.

Okay... I remember reading this and telling my opinion then, but for some reason I never got around to actually writing a review... weird.

Anywho, I love Dark Link and Donner's banter. It fits very well.

Of course, I equally love the fluff, but that's to be expected.

Keep it up!

very nice, you've got me hooked on the story. I'm not very familiar with the plotline of this specific zelda game, but i like it a lot.
i laugh at Dark Link for getting blown off by Donner. ^_^

Nicely done! I, too, think it's cool that you're using material from the earlier games, the comics, and the cartoon. Strictly speaking, you may have jumped the gun with Link and Zelda getting together (since the cartoon is set after AoL and he's still pining for a kiss at tha point), but hey, it spares us from the infamous 'Excuse me' line and his stupid attitude, and for that I'm grateful. :D

This is an excellent fic.

I think that you got the portrayals just right and I love the OCs.

Keep it up!

Hey, give me a break. I had to go on a trip.

Anyway, about the chapter. Very good. I think you'd shown me most of this one before, but I do like the king having a heart attack (I'm guessing). Poor old king. You give him heart failure and I flat out kill him. Not a lucky character.

Maybe... Maybe I'll pry myself away from you know what to finish off my chapter.

Please Update!!