Why do I always find fics like forever after they are written! Ugh, I don't suppose it matters. Anyway. This is lovely! I really like the conversational way it is written, I have struggled with that sort of writing but you got it perfect! It's a girls mind running away from her...but it is plausible instead of silly. Yes, this is lovely! :)

that's a really cute peak at the potential married life of lisa and jackson. i love how you make the whole pen stabbing scar funny.

I thought I'd read every freakin' Red Eye there was by now... but this little gem I had missed. Loved it! VERY cool twist in the end, completely unexpected and it made me smile broadly.

Brilliant! :)

Interesting and amusing,"Some people might call all my consideration a bit premature.I say there’s no harm preparing for the inevitable future."

Plus, I love all your Read eye and Pirate of the Carribean stories.

Oh my goodness, you're AMAZING. I almost didn't read this because of the description, because I don't like when there's too much fluff to the point that it's completely unrealistic (although I am a J/L shipper). I am so glad I read it though, because it wasn't what I was expecting at all. I'm upset that you haven't gotten many reviews for this, because it's amazing. I think maybe you should alter the description, cause I think people might be thrown off by the "fluff" thing, so that's why they're not reading it.

Anyway, you're such an awesome writer. I love how conversational this was, and I absolutely loved the ending. I think this absolutely could be realistic, and you captured Lisa's feelings without being too gooey.

I thought this part was so perfectly stated:

"Sometimes I doubt if he could stop being all those things, if he has some sort of off button, or a dimmer-switch or something like that. There is something purely fantastic about him when he breathes, even though that’s a bit labored now, through my own doings. The part with the pen was sheer brilliance, and I think in time he will come to admit that on his own."

Fabulous.

That was hilarious! And cute. Way, way good job.

Well that was quite fascinating. A little disturbing but I always though L and J should be a couple. I throughly enjoyed it! :)

...0.0...That was incredibly funny and disturbing all at the same time. The thing about the "Lisa Was Here" tattoo cracked me up; I'm just glad I wasn't drinking anything while reading this.

"God, is he ever built.

I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry."

I'm not. *purrs, then snickers*

It's getting more and more ridiculous that I haven't seen this movie. How many fics can one squee before one has to actually experience the canon?

Particularly when the canon contains Cillian Murphy.

I like Lisa's train of thought. I can't pretend that mine wouldn't be following the same path, under the same conditions.

Wow, so amusing! XD I loved some of the lines in there...like when she first saw Jackson, the pen and headbutt thing, and especially the tatoo.

That was great! Jackson gay! That made me laugh, along with the mention of him considering getting a tatto over the scar. It was really neat how the story was all kind of her thoughts as they played their little game of cat-and-mouse in Joe's house. :)

*waves hand in the air* It was me! It was me! Pseudo-fluff, eh? I really wasn't expecting this so I'll just pretend that they do end up happily together _. And what a lovely, fantastic, delgihtful little piece this was. You crack me up. I applaud you. You're heart, Random-Battlecry-chan *huggles*.

*laughs* I love it! The last moment when she gives away WHEN these thoughts happen-priceless. You've got a way with timing, you know. :D

My God, this was FLIPPIN' AWESOME! You rock so much. *Claps hands* So good.

And of course, this made my day. Damn, why do you always know how to put a smile on my face? And yes, however "pseudo" it may be, definitely fluffity fluff fluff. Good times.

Gah! I adore this one. Thanks so much! *Puts in favorites* Much love _.