 ExileAvellynn 2009-06-08 . chapter 1 That feels SO wrong. (O_O) |
 Annie 2008-12-30 . chapter 1 I wish I never read that now. I mean, your a good author, but it creeped me out. Ugh. |
 Facing My Failure 2007-01-04 . chapter 1Oh, my God. That was... intense, to say the least. I liked it, more than I thought. Mostly because I love Atton/Exile so very much. This was well written. Strange, but well written. It makes one think, though. Atton always is shown as hating the Disciple. But its like, "Is it a facade?" The emotions were very intense and in-your-face, and I liked that. Wven though it was weird to me, I enjoyed it, overall. |
 Even Gods Dream 2006-12-18 . chapter 1Now that was yummy =) |
 Hehehe 2006-08-07 . chapter 1 That was adorable, really and truly. I would like to point out that, Miraluka's aside, a majority of the Star Wars galaxy is fine with gay/lesbians. In the first game, for example, Juhani was bi. She fell in love with Revan no matter the gender.
So Mical and Atton really don't have too much to worry about from the crew. Though they should probably hang onto that locked door idea... |
 LilliBell 2006-07-19 . chapter 1Well then, let me pleas the first one to tell ya how much i like this stuff. Or let me say that I LOVE it. ^^
Very nice, really. And hey, don't you think, there's enough AttenxFemExile stuff out there?
Please, please keep on writing. ;) |
 Dranzen 2006-03-25 . chapter 1I thought it was nice. It was well-written and very cute, as well as funny. This is one fic I am NOT going to forget for a long time.
~Zen-chan |
 Ilea Dreike 2006-03-10 . chapter 1I love it! I'm a big slash fan... Atton/Mical and Canderous/Carth are my favorites. ^__^ This was really well-written, though. Visas may have reacted a bit more strongly than I would've expected, but everyone sees the characters a little differently.
Excellent story, though. Atton's character was near perfect, and Mical was such an innocent cutie... good job! |
 Queenofinsanity 2006-03-10 . chapter 1I'm not flaming! I actually kinda like the idea... and the mental picture isn't half bad either
Seriously, though, there's nothing wrong with a little bit of slasherlyness now and then... in fact... I have this one with Candy and Carth...
yes, the Mandalorian and Carth. Mock me if you will, but it's actually a reject chappie for my Carth/Rev fic. Maybe I can post it on it's own merits... |
 Trillian4210 2006-03-07 . chapter 1I liked this one, but not the same as some others of yours. I thought the sparring went on a tad too long as did Atton's dialogue in which he keeps trying to convince Mical to buck convention and stay together. I didn't think Visas would have the reaction she did--or be so forceful in her distaste, but that is just me and my take on her character.
But I suspect you weren't really going for a by-the-book story anyway. This reads more like a statement about homosexuality and about defying social norms. In that sense, I think it is well done and I am glad you contintue to write from the heart, always unflinchingly, always without hesitation. For that, I admire this piece and I always look forward to reading your work. |
 DarthNexus9000 2006-03-07 . chapter 1interesting story |
 lOngshotOR 2006-03-07 . chapter 1 Cortessa, way to push the envelope. You are on a line, I think, but you play the story off very well, not dirty or anything like that. Perhaps a bit inspired by... Brokeback Mountain? Well, I thought it was a good fic, timed coincidently, or purposely with Rangermike's 'Descended from Heroes and Villains.' And also with the Gay Rights fight that seems like such a hot topic in today's society. Anyone who flames you for writing this, without of course 'Religious Obligation,' is just ignorant; so ignore them. Good writing and keep it up,
~lOngshotOR |
 Green Earth PFC 2006-03-07 . chapter 1I like, especially because these two usually end up beating each other up and/or murdering each other for less useful reasons. |
 Phoenixasending 2006-03-07 . chapter 1Aw, thats so cute. Don't feel self concious about liking gay pairings, me and some of my friends like 'em too and I've seen a few of them posted on this site mostly atton/MExile though. They're cute. :) Is this going to become a permanent pairing or a one shot deal in your series? |
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