Cute! I love it! It's a very well written story, and it's set up in a believable way. Good Job! Please up date soon!

Beautiful story. Please continue it, because it can't end there. You should write more on it.

Thanks for sharing.

Cute, Hot, Original.. Love It.

Keep it Up.

(Out of the many hits you've gotten.. I'll be nice and review, I know how that feels. -smiles-)

Evey*

How cute!! Gau and Relm are perfectly in-character, and you managed to somehow make that pairing seem like it would work. (I've never considered them a couple, mainly because Relm's only 10 or 11 in the game and Gau's just... immature. But, I've never disliked the pairing either.) I also liked how you described Gau inadvertently screwing everyone's lives up, because that's definitely something I can relate to (well, not to Gau's extent... but you know what I mean.)

I noticed that this was Chapter I... so I can hope to see more in the future. =)