WE!~
what a long story!!
but it was very goodies!! ^^

I can definately see Sora doing his Keyblade Master job in a world like this. I like how you described all the emotions in this--not just the character's but the moods of the settings as well.

This is in my +favorites. :)

Man-flu. I thought that was so cute.

Ah nostalgia of playing FF7 and having to keep moving on the cliff to stay alive! Still can't remember the woman though, I really will have to re-play.

Goofy really is the Father of the group! Cute, it makes me like him, since as I never liked his cartoons. *Goofy love*

Aw, poor Sora's caught a cold. *Giggles* Man-flu! That is so true.

Wow.

That was one LONG, but --aWeSoMe--, way to end a great story! I loved it! That 'man-flu' thing was funny...har har har. xD

As usual, the battle scenes were immaculate, and Sora was described so...so...ADORABLE-Y. ♥ ^_^ *big big smile*

Anyway, it was perfect. Lovely story, bravo, bravo.

C i a o ~ ~ ~

--Me

I'm glad this little story ended with a long chapter. ^_^ I thought it was pretty freaky how the Lady of the Inn died...even just thinking about falling into a deep abyss...woo. I liked this chapter a lot and it was a nice ending to a nice little fic. Thumbs up to you! ^_^b

Anyway, I'm not getting KH2 right away. I have two tests to take and I don't want to get distracted and not study. >.< So it'll probably be another week for me. And again, I hope it comes out soon for you too! :P

ahh, man-flu! Thats adorable... this is such a good story! Well done!

Poor Sora, he caught a man-flu. *tries very hard not to, but ends up chuckling* Poor cub. He's like me--Summer is the only season for us! Ah, well, at least there isn't any snow in Traverse Town unless it's in somebody's icebox. Good riddance to the ice-witch, although I kinda feel sorry for the dragon on general principles. Awesome story, ginger-san!

Excellent end to the story. Poor Sora, heck of a way to have your dream of snow crushed. The last line got me too. Hurray! Keep writing!

Heart:O.O e how that lady died was freaky, you can't see her but you still hear her screaming to her death (shivers) uh oh

Sora: what?

Heart: a-a joke is floating into my head XD

Sora: hee ^^;

She jumped up, leaving herself completely open. Goofy used his Rocket ability to stop her from landing, Donald pushed her back further in the air with a well-aimed Fira and Sora’s Strike Raid sent the Lady of the Inn tumbling outside the circle of stones and down, down, down into the abyss.

It took a long time for the echoes of her screams to fall silent.

Sora slowly step over close to the edge looking over the side curously.

"Hey erm, why did you scream there's no huge drop" the cute brunette questioned scratching his left cheek. yes and it was very true what they thought to have been a abyss on first glance was only a knee high drop, and so, the lady of the Inn hadn't fallen to her death but was in fact just laying there stupidly flat out on the icey cold floor.

the woman sharply sat up glaring at the fourteen year old "i was trying to give myself a dramatic looking death, and you ruined it!" and she jumped up to her feet quickly "i can't work with you three its impossible! you with your s-stupid question yauck!" the lady of inn said pointing at Goofy and then to remain two staring at her in shock.

"You ducky with your weirding sound of a sound, and you child with your...er...your...spike of a hair what is with that!" she raved at him, a sweatdrop appearing on backs of the three's heads.

Sora blinked confused at her "whats wrong with my hair?" he questioned, acting as through it really was normal for people to have they're hair standing on all ends and such that only hair gel could do. Buts thats Square enix for you, creating charcters with insane hairs styles. that backing up also with the thing that the lady of the inn hadn't left the frozen lands and had stayed away from people alot...wow she must of gotten really bored having nothing to do huh ^^;

"I-I give up i can't win with you mere mortals!" she screamed grabbing her head as though her brains would explode and went running out of the place screaming, leaving Sora,Donald and Goofy to exchanged glances with one another.

"er, what was that all about?" said Sora, the woman's screaming of insaneness still heard off in the distant.

"woman's troubles" Donald answered him crossing his...wingy arms o.O

Sora gave him a blank stare, "huh?"

"you know time of the month" Donald said to the brunette but only got the same blank stare showing he didn't have a clue what he was talking about. "..time of the wha?"

"gah i'm not teaching you anymore things we're not your parents, you didn't even know what a bra was till you saw one on the line a few weeks ago" the duck commented frustrated.

Goofy extented his finger up "that you mistook for a boomerage"

the boy sweatdropped "b-but it look like one" Sora nervously chuckled going red. Donald slapped his forehead sighing "i give up on this kid"

Sora: (watching eatting popcorn) so Donald what is a bra?

Donald: GAH! kids thse days!

Heart: ^^; odd how i came up with that just now huh

Kairi: yep and Sora your so cute when your dumb your know that

Sora: ^^; yeah i can't lie

Heart: i loved the chapter XD Sora and snow don't match huh lol

Ahh, this story is soo good! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

Oh dear, the poor gang. Hope the starnger will be able to sort them out and tell them who the crazy lady was. Keep writing and update soon!

Oh my GOD this story is so AMAZING.

I'll be sure to check your other stories as well. You're an excellent writer.

Ah, I could picutre the battle perfectly. Killer snowmen and boulder snowballs. Poor Sora lol! Once again, great job!

Yay! Two updates to read. ^^ After this I'll read ATR a little later since someone else wants to use the computer. :P I'm on Spring Break right now...KH2 comes out in a week so things are really starting to get exciting.
Anywoo...the idea of a Yeti Heartless is really cool, as well as the icy blue tinted Shadows and the snowmen-type Heartless. I loved all of the fights they did, and it was nice to see a description of what Donald and Goofy did too, since usually they're left in the dust and Sora gets all the glory. :) And yikes! The Lady of the Inn seems like a crazy woman! Poor Sora...I'd literally have collapsed from the cold while he's still hanging in there. Well, at least at the end he was able to get to some shelter and go to sleep. I'm anxious to find out what happens next! :P Great work and I look forward to more.

Snow Heartless FTW! XD

Brilliant fight scenes as usual -- poor cold Sora! Having to dish out some ownage to Heartless and try to keep warm. ;)

Lovin' this little story -- snow makes things so fluffy and cute! Or cuter in Sora's case.