A great story. Very well written.

This was...different, I guess. but in a really good way. Short and sweet, I love it.

too short. one more line would have ended it poignantly...this just seems abrupt.

Magic, or Love. The difference is really not that big. Beautiful about a highly suggestive part of the triology.

so sweet

A very interesting idea to write about, and well written too, with some brilliant use of language.