that was so sad but really good please do a seqeul i loved it

Wh'd he die? WHY'D YA MAKE HIM DIE? Only kidding. But, seriously, great work. That is SO in my favourites. Thanks for the great great great read, it almost made me CRY. (If you need more help believing that I actually am serious, then just repeat the top two lines about, um, let's say, sixty thousand or so times.)

i almost cried :(
ur an amazing writer. dont ever stop :)

But...but...he can't die! Well, actually he can because it's fanfiction. I mean, I myself have killed him twice (I think...)...but that's not the point! This is very poignant (wow, I hope I spelled that right...) and touching and almost made me cry, too. But a big part of me loves it when Danny's in pain, so...I can't get too emotional. Wow, I don't know what I'm saying anymore. I must be tired. Nice poem, anyway!
--DPSG1

Normally I have trouble reading and understanding poems, but this one was clear and precise. (for a poem :-) It is really super good! Keep writing!

... every time i read or see or hear something belivibly sad or romantic and not like the end of the movie they watched at the beginning of "win a date with tod hamilton" i start to tear up.. sob. this is why i dont usually read these types of things...but this was pretty good considering i dont even like danny phantom that much to begin with. . GOD... this is why teenage boys dont do anything but watch James Bond and play video games, cause were not sposed to cry lol.. cheers

Oh dear. That was fairly depressing. If you hadn't put that happiness for Heaven in, I would have been in pure teary brerakdown. Very well writen.

... I think I'm about half way between crying and laughing hysterically. Crying at the poem, but laughing at the fact that at the bottom of the page is an ad that says 'Are you a happy person?'

A very emotional poem, very sad, and very well written.

wow-that was good, and very sad..im almost crying! great poem!

I need a tissue ;_; That was so sad. Great work!

SO SAD!

*sniff* That was really sad. :( How did he start to die? Was it a ghost battle or was his life naturally short because of his ghost half? I love it. It's so sad.

I LOVE it:)

That was...depressing, to say the least...poor Danny...

Oh man, that is beautifully depressing. Absolutely beautiful... aw crap, I need kleenex again. T_T Probably not my brightest idea, reading a super-angsty piece after I already got myself all worked up to tears working on my own fics.

This is a masterful poem, I must salute your ability, one poet to another. Congratualations, this is a masterpiece.

~Firefury Amahira