If I didn't know what happend next I would cry. Brilliant poem that seems to capture her thoughts well.

okay..

oh, wow... absolutely beautiful... I loved it

Wonderful. I love Raist and Crysania and I love your poem.

awww, that is so sad! It seems to be exactly what Crysania was thinking when The Incident happened. Great poem.

I love angst...

Wounderful! I think you really figured out, what Crysania must have felt, there in the Abyss, lying in the dark...

Could you please write something similiar of Raistlin, maybe just before he gets to his eternal sleep? Anyway, you should definately continue writing! PLEASE!

Oh my, this was wonderful. I love it. It's absolutely wonderful.Yes, I absolutely LOVE it.

You have some sort of GIFT, I swear. I LOVE this. This is GOOD. You really go into Crysania's heart and soul, and it's so sad and somehow sweet. Write more about her, you're so good at it!

That was so beautiful... I liked it alot. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading.

..I love. I LOVE.. You need to write more. ::Glare.:: Write...more...