Interesting take on their co-ruler/family relationship. Also it's a relief to see Peter being less than perfet for once!

this was wonderful!
I know you wrote it a few years ago, but i just wanted to say that i adored it, and i thought you captured the Pevensie's very well. Not at all OOC. I loved the way you wrote Susan. Wonderful work!!

This is a great story!

Susan using Peter as her target for archery made me laugh, poor guy *snorts with laughter*

Loved it.
Peter is so-- argh, peter!
Great!
Luna

nice i like it.

"If you weren't my sister, I'd marry you myself." As disturbing as that thought is (I'm not criticizing you at all) it was very appropriate in this story. Great job!

hehe. that was hilarious. great job! i loved how susan was the one to handle it.

The was one of THE best fics I've ever read. And bacause of that, I'll be reading a lot more of your fics. Also, you get to be one of my favorite authors.

I loved your story!! Amazing how you wrote it. It had light humor just like the books had, you didn't stay too long on one scene that it became boring but you didn't skip to a next scene to fast that the reader would want to know more what happened. It was very well-written. Too bad I only stumbled upon it now. Keep writing, okay?

great! go susan and overprotective!peter!

Hurrah for Susan! I just LOVED that story! It was so funny an I laugh so hard. Great plot, great writing skills and in a nutshell great story!

Ooh! I really liked it.
Goes against that whole prince-will-save-everything-blah-blah-blah crap. Lovely! :)
I always knew Su could handle herself.
*rants about Prince Caspian*

No more miss nice reviewer! This isn't that good needs a lot of work. This is NOT narnia! this is a royal smack down. creative and interesting but with nothing but that to offer. there is no true excitement in your story. I didn't care for it, sorry.
(Just so ya know this is about as mean a review as i tend to give but don't take it too hard.)

Uh, well...it's interesting and the righting is sort of okay...but...
Come on lets face it! the Pevensie children have a bit more class than your giving them in this story. Your idea was wonderfull and it's a very amusing little story but next time try to do a little better. I'm not saying don't have the pevensie kids aruge because that would be boring and not fun to read but cant you give them a little more self-respect and class?
Sorry 'bout the harsh review but you needed it.

This was a great story/chapter. Genius, actually. It was clever and funny and it made me laugh. Susan was great, Peter was hilarious. . . I love stories that made Edmund clever, more liberal, and more willing to compromise that Peter. He wasn't called "The Just" for nothing! Anyway, a great chapter and idea of Narnian silk was really magnificent. I may have to borrow it one day. =]

Fantastic job!

Great chapter! This story is excellent. Your development of Potens as another country in Narnia is quite well done and very believable. I do love Peter trying to do it all on his own, the little glimpse of Susan practicing for her demonstration the next day.