 PeterBladley19 2006-10-30 . chapter 1Hi! Can you please write more?! I just love jealousy fanfiction! * I am giving a devil look* i like them because I want to see who gets the girl or boy but in this case a girl. please e-mail me back!! |
 Detective E. Yin 2006-10-05 . chapter 1Sounds like Xander has turned green in more ways than one... I usually don't support 'shipping Xander and Mattie, but this was cute... not too obvious, it was kind of subtle, subtle enought that I liked it. |
 Star-Girl11235 2006-05-21 . chapter 1o jealousy is always the lead upt to an awesome story |
 loser at the beach 2006-03-29 . chapter 1I liked that. What is going to happen next? I hope you continue soon!
Deadly Love and Bloody Kisses,
Rhayne |
 aquarius12285 2006-03-15 . chapter 1This was really good. I liked how Xander was watching Nick and Madison. I was amused when Xander ended up kissing both Madison and Vida during the truth or dare flashback. The last line in particular was very effective. I think you got all you intended to get out of it. Well done. |
 emb22 2006-03-10 . chapter 1I just started watching MF this week, so I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I really liked this fic. First of all, with only 4 episodes of MF having been aired, it takes guts to even write a MF story to begin with since there isn't much to go off of. Secondly, I like how you established a developing romantic interest between Xander and Madison rather than just springing it on the reader as is the case with other MF fics I've come across. Frankly, the whole all-of-a-sudden-they-kiss-and-love-each-other is a bit far-fetched to me. Anyways, nicely done. |
 Sergeant Scarlett 2006-03-07 . chapter 1That was good, and cute! Poor Xander! |
 Court19 2006-03-07 . chapter 1Yay, go Xander/Madison stories! This was excellent, keep it up! |
 Destiny45 2006-03-07 . chapter 1This to me was the better story. Loved the flashback party, and loved that last line. Oh, also liked the line: "It was the last time Vida ever suggested the game Truth or Dare but Xander had wished he had chosen truth and told Madison he liked her."
I really like your MF writings! Please write more. |
 Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2006-03-07 . chapter 1Aw! That's cute! |
 Dannie Tomlinson 2006-03-07 . chapter 1Wow! Excellent fic! Loved it! Please update soon! |