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Reviews for: Secretly Watching
PeterBladley19
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
Hi! Can you please write more?! I just love jealousy fanfiction! * I am giving a devil look* i like them because I want to see who gets the girl or boy but in this case a girl. please e-mail me back!!
Detective E. Yin
2006-10-05 . chapter 1
Sounds like Xander has turned green in more ways than one... I usually don't support 'shipping Xander and Mattie, but this was cute... not too obvious, it was kind of subtle, subtle enought that I liked it.
Star-Girl11235
2006-05-21 . chapter 1
o jealousy is always the lead upt to an awesome story
loser at the beach
2006-03-29 . chapter 1
I liked that. What is going to happen next? I hope you continue soon!
Deadly Love and Bloody Kisses,
Rhayne
aquarius12285
2006-03-15 . chapter 1
This was really good. I liked how Xander was watching Nick and Madison. I was amused when Xander ended up kissing both Madison and Vida during the truth or dare flashback. The last line in particular was very effective. I think you got all you intended to get out of it. Well done.
emb22
2006-03-10 . chapter 1
I just started watching MF this week, so I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I really liked this fic. First of all, with only 4 episodes of MF having been aired, it takes guts to even write a MF story to begin with since there isn't much to go off of. Secondly, I like how you established a developing romantic interest between Xander and Madison rather than just springing it on the reader as is the case with other MF fics I've come across. Frankly, the whole all-of-a-sudden-they-kiss-and-love-each-other is a bit far-fetched to me. Anyways, nicely done.
Sergeant Scarlett
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
That was good, and cute! Poor Xander!
Court19
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
Yay, go Xander/Madison stories! This was excellent, keep it up!
Destiny45
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
This to me was the better story. Loved the flashback party, and loved that last line. Oh, also liked the line: "It was the last time Vida ever suggested the game Truth or Dare but Xander had wished he had chosen truth and told Madison he liked her."

I really like your MF writings! Please write more.
Blue Eyed Dragon Girl
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
Aw! That's cute!
Dannie Tomlinson
2006-03-07 . chapter 1
Wow! Excellent fic! Loved it! Please update soon!
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