Hi.

I love your story!!
You described Johns reactions really realistic.

May I ask if you think about finishing it?

Great story and Beginning please continue

More more Shep and Team

Good Job

again please update son xD

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im really enjoying this story! its pretty intense...i hope you write more incredibly soon and dont leave me hanging there! :)
thank you so much for sharing this with us!
this is amazing...i cant wait for more!

I just found your story, but it is a work in progress, please tell me it is finished on a different site, I would love to read the end of it. Thanks!

Great fic poor John
i hope update soon

Thank's for this story is amazing please finished ^_^

Very, very good! I was ROTFL at some of McKay's lines. You were right about the Wraith kill, nasty, nasty stuff that. Now, what about the LP's and John's depression?

My favorite scene was Ronon's shrugging and tossing the Wraith meat over his shoulder. Perfection.

Hope to read from you soon. Thanks.

Just found your stories, and started with this one. What a great story! However, it's just plain cruel to leave it unfinished. At least tell us who stole Ronan's refrigerated "goodies"!

What a great story and extremely well written too!
The way your plot unfolds just caught me in an instant and your portrayal of the characters plays out very nicely and true to the show.
This one easily made it to my list of favourite fanfics!
BTW, I'm waiting desperately for an update since I came across it in December.
Please update soon.
Please!
Please?

Aww Poor John. Can't wait for you to update soon.

love the story and look forward to reading more

Loving this fic to DEATH! But...it hasn't been updated...in so long! What happens with the new listening post? Does it happen? Does Sheppard get healthy again? WHO is stealing Ronon's food? Please update soon!

This has been a good story -- I'm interested in the resolution. Shep is pretty ticked right now. We haven't seen Shep and Elizabeth arguing like this. Can't wait

"definitely not by Rodney’s verbal torrents about his flying lab monkeys making mistakes"

Love this phrase. And course loving the story.

i am a girl of few words...i just wanted to say that your story is great with the exception of sheppard...usually he is not so draw in to himself and is more talkitive and i understand that he just went through a lot...but im just saying this sheppard u wrote is somewhat different then the one on the show...but it is still good

oh your back!! yippe great chappy can't wait for next one!