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| acegrace 2008-03-28 ch 5,  | abuseoh BIG GIANT HUGE ENORMOUS sigh! what a beautiful ending to a great story! A perfect balance of case and BB i think! please write more stories! |
| Straycat1 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuse*claps wildly* Love that ending!! Warm fuzzies tingling all over, Well done! |
| Peppy87 2007-04-28 ch 5, | abuseLOVE it! |
| Inthannon 2007-03-03 ch 5, | abuseI really liked this one as well as the "if your world falls apart I'll be there" one, although in the first one the fact that Tessa did what she did was somehow bothering me. Also, although I really like the way you write you have several quite obvious typos and mistakes in these. I mean no offense, I just try to give constructive critisism as much as possible.. Otherwise great job!! |
| Juliette Angel 2006-07-06 ch 5, | abuseAw! They end up together...*grin* I hope the TV show BONES will develop B&B's relationship in the second season to make it more personal then professionnal, but in a way that will make sense. There are some people on this web site who just write sex scenes with B&B that aren't making any sense, because they (B&B) just wouldn't jump at it right away. I like the fact that some, like you, know how to develop their relationship and make it believable when they finally hook up. This was a nice story, thank you. |
| artigiano 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abusehm... i like the story and the writing. however, i don't like the tessa ordeal. i think that is bring a whole other story into this one. instead, you could have said that after a recently bad case temperance and booth's relationship had changed a bit or something of the like. i especially don't like it when you add the tessa story in and don't explain it fully. still, i like the story. in the further though, i would maybe be more caustious about mixing two extremely different stories. |
| Stephanie519 2006-04-14 ch 5, | abuseAw, I love it. I can't believe it took me so long to review. I'm really sorry. Anywho, great chapter. I love your stuff! Steph |
| EternalConfusion 2006-03-31 ch 5, | abuseAww, I'm glad they finally admitted everything and got together. :) I love them...they're so...I dunno, right for each other. Great fic, this and the prequel, really well written, and I loved the ways in which the relationship developed, more realistic. |
| Erkith 2006-03-21 ch 5, | abusepoor booth, but it all ends well ;) very much enjoyed! |
| Saunerbug 2006-03-19 ch 5, | abuseI love your stories!! They are so great!! Is there going to be a sequel to this on to? Please?!?!? I hope so! |
| nascarisdalejr 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuselove it! |
| AJeff 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuseLove Part Thirteen. Great chapter. |
| Death By Teacup 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuseGreat story!! You are an amazing writer! :) |
| Cariad 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuseLove the ending, really cute. |
| NidrianRuuthane 2006-03-15 ch 5, | abuseVery Sweet, well-written. :) |