...Hi, you just lost me. a little help here?

Interesting plot... Haven't seen something like this before. Please update!

AA

thats it i have just died happy. and my spirit is reviewing right now. you have made me a very happy camper. you really don't know how much i love you right now. you are my fav bionicle auther right now. and you will be for a long time to come.

It was a little confusing at first, but I got the jist. Nice job!

OMG THIS STORY IS AWESOME!

don't read my last review my computer glitch on me and put the wong review on.

the chapter is confussing but nice.
you need to stop being uncomfortable and start to us that teenage mind. you had the start of a nice looking lemon at the end. oh yaeh is ino and kiga like what sajin and zaix in there relationship? and you hive it in you to do it.
i'm not tring to be rude if i am i'm sorry. in other news my myspace is up i'll send you an invite.

that's both an amusing & sad sight. lol!

Hey! I found out I can only review once per chapter so I came here. Got your e-mail. I do have a yahoo IM and I'd be happy to geek out over SG1. I recently got the first five seasons and I'm looking for the others as well. Which season of SG1 are you using for this story? Must be one of the earlier ones cause Jack isn't a General and Cameron isn't there. Well, e-mail me back and have a great day!

*Grins* This fic rocks! ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

Very nicely written! I like the idea of poor Onewa wrapped up in a net! Any chance we'll hear from the other two kora soon?

Whoo! A new chappie!!I love this story so much. yeah I would advise some editing, there are a fwe mistakes here and there, But I shouldn't lecture you on spelling anyway, I hate it and almost never edit anything that I write, unless it's school work.Any way,...I got nothin bye!

Imma REVIEWING M'KKAY?! xD

Like always I adore the interactions between the Kora and the Toa. Onua's so cute in this chapter(especially with the hugs an 'thank yous!' part) :P I was smirking at Pohatu getting ensnared, that mean the scream was his? xD

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Onua's the oldest?!?! I thought Tahu was... oh well your story... Anyway, great job! (The Tahu's the oldest thing is just what i'm used to is all and I thought that Onua and Pohatu where the two shortest... If you could e-mail me to tell me what you ment, I'd appreicate it...)

More Please!

YEAH! You finally updated! THANK YOU SOO FRIGGIN MUCH. by the wat nice chapter.love tala and storm. my fav. characters.:D thank the gods above you updated. keep it up. bye