ahh! amazing story. ah. haha but i really adore the plot and everything, and how lust is evolving and remembering and whatnot. keep up the good work!!

I love the idea..
Roy as homunculus
I thought that he'll suit more being pride than lust

OOC..yeah,too much..i mean, ed became so childish,yet he should be more mature with his love life
It'll taste more delicious if u make him more angst than emotional

Overall, please next chapts 8D

Poor Ed. And Roy is starting to remember. I really hope someone finds Ed soon. I searched this fic out when I saw that drawing of Envy grabbing Ed's braid in the fourth chapter. Is there any chance of Roy coming back completly to his former self? If you ever update this I can't wait.

Wow this chapters pretty cool its got some action in it but all in all it's a good story

I know this is kinda weird me being a guy and all but this is a really well wrote story. I do have one other thing to say ... ITS SO FUNNY! I think that Al and Armstong well get together lol. Keep up the good writing. K.

whe...i'm crying*sob* maybe it's because i'm a bit sensitive with character death...
it's so sad y'know...but i love this story,i'm waiting for the update!!

anyway,can u pleasee...pretty please don't kill Roy..i just..don't like character death..

Oh MY! I loved it! PLEASE post more soon! *Is dancing* That was so awsome!

I think I sent you a review earlier, but non-the-less, please Send me a note or E-mail when you get the next chapter up!

~ Annette ~

i realy hope the next chappie comes out soon i loved this one so much

heh, I like this story a lot n_n Keep up the good work! *grins*

Yay! You finally updated! If i were Ed i'd give Envy a good beating! One to the face, gut and ow... groin. Thats gotta hurt! LOL! Update soon!

Your chapters are choppy and feel empty. If only you added some thing more to 'fill it up' a bit more.
Tho, this chapters was plainly cruel. =) I love cruelness.

This is so good...I think they should kidnap him..haha...cause I'm evil like that. Anyway, this is awesome. Please update asap.

I'm sure I speak for all of us, Kaitlin, when I say FINALLY. AN UPDATE. OM-FREAKIN'-G.

Lovely, as usual, this chapter. I'm deeply in love with your Envy--he is so in-character and I just adore all his lines. You kinda made Ed OOC, though. Would he really cry if someone was taking advantage of him? He hardly cries during the season itself, and he only DID when it really mattered (such as when Nina died, etc...). Ed's pretty strong emotionally, obviously, and he'd most likely just beat the ** outta anyone who touched him the wrong way. But, yeah, concrit is good for fan fiction. :D

And HAWKEYE. She will forever be annoying. D: If SHE asked ME to lunch, I'd run out of the damn country. Seriously.

Anywho, hope you're enjoying high school and everything~. Miss you~! x3 And if you get the time, e-mail me or something (same goes for you, Bayleigh :D).

wow, I really like this story. It's so sad though. I definately want to read more of this.

YAY! U UPDATED! how long's it been -counts-... ... uh... haugh! damn u envy! -bitchslaps him with anger- aw. poor edo. O_o please update soon!