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Cailee
2008-07-07
ch 11, anon.
abuseokay i am so glad you finaly updated. after febuary i basically gave up on you and stopped checking for a new chapter. i sorta accidently found this story again and lucky for me, there was annother chapter! i realize that you updated in march but i saw that you said you hadnt updated in months a few chapters back so i dont think you have abandoned this story so please update soon! :)
Whispering Lotus
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseYour story is simply great (^.^) I love it and it is so funny and exciting too. I can't wait until next chapter. PLease oh please update soon (=^_^=)
Chilo
2008-06-18
ch 11,
abuseHaha. This is indeed very different from everything I've seen around here.

I have to say, the first two chapters just scared me. You put a very interesting mood in the description of Rosette's tremor. It was so well explained, I could feel those cold sensations.

Chapter 10 blew me away. The beginning had me sweating. Loved that.

I can't wait to see how else this folds out. Take your time on the updates. We can wait.

BUT FOR THE LOVE OF GOD.
PLEASE,
PLEASE,
Do NOT abandon this project!
:)
BlackMoonWhite
2008-05-29
ch 11,
abuseWELCOME BACK. -shakes dust off- I think I fell asleep waiting for you...it's been a while, huh? Now, onto the review!

I SEE PLOT! :O Ooh. So technically, they're not immortal. Which means...they can grow old together! They can die together! NO MORE TRAGIC ENDINGS like in the manga, where I cried every time I thought about it for weeks afterwards. Jeez.

HOAHGOODGRIEF! If cutting off his head can't kill, what will?!

I really like how the motif of 'constantly running' from the canon has wound itself into the plot here. Whether or not it's intentional, it's still a nice little bonus for this fanfic. :D

-goes back to corner- I shall await your next update, like so. Ufufufu.
BlackMoonWhite
2008-05-29
ch 10,
abuseEHEHEHEH. ...-ahem- Sorry, that first half just had me in a fit of girlish giggling. Chrno can be really, uhm, alluring when he wants, huh? It's great, this makes up for the total _lack_ of sexual tension in the canon.

Fine writing, yet again. Everything seems to flow, from one line to the next. I'm...really jealous. (But I won't begrudge you if you continue updating quickly!) And Huzzah for longer chapters!!
God of Laundry Baskets
2008-05-02
ch 11,
abuseHaha, total win! I love Vampire!Chrono~ Though I think Rosette is a bit wimpy in here it seems like she's taking control. She just seems to me like the kind of girl who rather than waiting for her hero, goes out and kicks the butt herself. I love the story so far though~

Hope you update soon~
Itallia
2008-04-20
ch 11,
abuseLOL! That last line was so perfect...

I'm having such trouble characterizing Chrno. Is he "bad" or "good?" And I'm also having trouble telling where this story's going, or if we're already in the heart of it, or what.
gir29
2008-04-07
ch 11,
abuseI love this story and I've had it on my favoite stories list for a long time, but you hadn't updated in so long that I thought you had given up on it. Please don't waut so long to update, you'll scaqre me. I really do love your story though. keep it up!
Cygos
2008-03-22
ch 11,
abusehm...vampiric Chrno, nummy
Silverwing5566
2008-03-14
ch 11,
abuseawsome story! I love it ^.^
That Crazy Girl
2008-03-10
ch 11,
abuse:3

This was so good.
That Crazy Girl
2008-03-10
ch 3,
abuseDark Chrno is so cool. Thank you for writing this story! I'm really liking it so far. Hurray!
That Crazy Girl
2008-03-10
ch 2,
abuseOh, scary! =D

I think I'll really like this story.
Kinda-Mayvelle
2008-03-09
ch 11,
abuseThat last line made my day.
MisoGirl
2008-03-09
ch 11,
abuse. . . she might just wana call for a chastity belt . . .
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