wicked! can't wait till you upload next! upload soon!

Thank you so much! You rock! You are making a decent story that has Christie in it. Now i can relate to that and she has a crush on Hwoarang. Are you reading my mind here? Keep going.

Wow, a completely new plot to the Tekken fandom! I can't wait to see how this one plays out. It truly is awesome that you've selected some of the characters who don't get so much limelight. That 'has' to promise a good read. ;)

Nice. I'm interested. Can I hound you for an update?

A very original idea. Where do you get the creativity from!?

It's great to see a couple of more background charaters who aren't really used coming forward to. Awesome looking story.

Whew! It let me review again. You know I already read this, but I wanted to review anyway.^_^

Its really nice to see an orginal idea come up, its really refreshing. I've been reading tekken fanfics for quite sometime, even before I became a member of this place, and I'm glad to see that not only have you managed to write a new plot that isn't seen around here. Also I love that you are using some of the characters that people here tend to barely use. I wish you good luck on your writing cause I know how nerve racking it is to post up a new story(because I'm just posting up my first one now). I hope you continue!

this is catching my interest. i'd love to read more. as has been said, update soon.

~lIN

cool idea update soon!

I really liked this chapter. Can't wait for the next one :D