Oh...the ending...
*dies laughing*

That was so good. I absolutely adored it. For some reason I always figured Jayne to have a hair fetish. It just made sense to me. And Zoe does have really gorgeous hair, I love it. And I think Jayne wanting to brush her hair is cute and the fact that he knows how and does it good is even cuter. I imagine that his sisters had him do it for them all the time and maybe that's why he enjoys it. I wouldn't mind Jayne wanting to brush my hair, that's for gorramn sure. And Zoe brushing Jayne's chest hair is just great. lol That was really awesome. Great job.
-Bella

Alright, that was just too cute.

Great job.

That was the sweetest Hat ever! I mean ... it was so cute! It just made me think of "Heart Of Gold" when he was brushing that whore's hair! Oh, I almost died! Though I might've guessed that they are together at this point, cause I wouldn't think that this would happen if they hadn't been. It was so cute with him askin'. -shakes head- You're making me like the idea of Jayne and Zoe. Good job! -waves- more from you. ;-)

hehe...ewhh! that was great. I just read cactus, weeds, and then this...lots of fun. what lj are you using for your fic?

HAHAHA! Okay you can totally disregard any beggin I'm ever or did do. GENIUS!

Sunny

Oh, meow! You made my brain steam! What a delicious mental image.

I never considered Zoe/Jayne, but writers like you have converted me. It is perfectly sensible and in-character for both of them.

I appreciate your excellent character voices. More please!