Reviews for The Mother of Invention

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carino2 2008-07-02 ch 1,	abuseI really liked that a lot. "Could there be anyone more worthy of your love, after all, than yourself?" I think that's a question we all ask ourselves. And I was glad that you made Opal not into a cold-hearted, insane killer, but someone who could still think and feel. And what she did seemed to me something to redeem herself. Great job.
Infinity 2008-03-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like it. It is fitting in a dark sort of sense. It was an interesting concept, and also a true one.The only person Opal could love was herself. The second person tense is innovative as well. All in all, a good, thought provoking read.
miroku-has-darkness 2007-08-07 ch 1,	abusewow that is really really good, I don't know if I would of liked you to use names but then that would lessen the power of the story so for now i'm content
luver of jellybeans 2007-07-16 ch 1,	abuseWonderful, absolutely wonderful fic!! claps You had me confused a while there... and the Argon and Cumulus having a field day part. Though I think that was your purpose. :D
Catland Creator 2007-04-24 ch 1,	abuseHOT **, I'm stupid. I didn't understand the fic, and had to read it three times to understand the A/N answer, and then I had to read the reviews before understanding it. Still, I'm dissapointed. I love Arty/Opal.
Decce 2007-04-24 ch 1,	abuseWOW. I ~ can't ~ believe it. You confused me so much there, but in the best way possible! At first, I 100% believed that it was Artemis who was falling in love with Opal. But then the last line went, "Could there be anyone more worthy of your love, after all, than yourself?" and it just completely threw me off. Also, there were hints earlier, but goodness! You did an amazing job! How did you come up with this? I'm just so happy and speechless that I got the chance to read it. Opal in prison facing her clone! I absolutely know I could have never ever ever come up with something as ingenious as this, and for all I know, you're probably Artemis Fowl the Second yourself and I'm just some happy-go-lucky admirer whose IQ is negative one thousand and you're some all-knowing God I absolutely adore! 10! I really loved it! A lot! ;D - June
Sovrani 2007-02-24 ch 1,	abuseReally, really powerful. And very confusing. I would have never thought to write something like this, and if I did I'd write it really badly. I need to read it again now, to understand it a bit better. Congrats on a fantastic fic. Sovrani
Roadkil 2006-11-16 ch 1,	abuse... Oh mah~ Clonecest~ .:ASPLODED:. Just stunning. I mean, like, y'know ... And then it was lik- Well, it's really good. Don't ask me to expand because I'll confuse myself. But, yes. Highly original and such. Your style is just neat! So keep writing to make me happy. Plskthx. c:
Nips 2006-11-15 ch 1,	abuseOHmigod. At first I was like, "What? Who did Artemis kill? Guess it's an AU..." And later, "Oh, SHITE! It's not!?" I seriously was thinking the whole time, it's so twisted, this isn't right, Artemis is being mangled, it must be someone else because this is too sad for him, but who else could it be? All brilliance on your part. I've never had such a violent epiphany moment before. Hehe. Great job with the mind trick.
RandyFan 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseGreat story!
Morrigan's Wings 2006-10-06 ch 1,	abuseWeird,but well written.
Basser (x2) 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseJust reread after... Ages. Damn, I wish I could give this some kind of super-favourite or something. xD Anyway, just felt like speaking up once more. Kudos on... Er... Making me review again. Definitely cooler the second time 'round, when you're not reeling over who the hell it is and getting all confused. Maybe now I'll have to go over His Son's Father again. ;D (M! Boredom!)
Sorako 2006-06-11 ch 1,	abuseOkay, it took me a sweet time to figure out that the imprisoned person was realy Opal (the human thing threw me off, I totally forgot that part of TOD)... but I didn't realise that the "newcomer" was the Opal clone until you pointed it out in the A/N's. feels stupid Sorry for not being constructive, but: great fic. :-)
Linwen, the n00b 2006-04-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseBut he... who... jawdrop Wow, Lily! That was truly amazing. :) I was thoroughly convinced it was Artemis till the last paragraph in which the 'wtf, wait a min-- OH MY GOD!'-ness of the situation assaulted my mind. Will re-read it on 'proper' context, this time, and I'm afraid I don't have much CC, only endless praise, but I guess that's fine, aye?
random191 2006-04-08 ch 1,	abusethis is extremely confusing

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