aw such a sad but sweet ending! great story! x

really liked this chapter! like how you got Dean's personality down. so horrible they killed Alex! he was really cool! :)
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That was one of the best written stories/fanfics I have ever read. The emotion and descriptions just dragged me in. Everything was so real and you really held true to both the boy's characters. Everything was flawless.

Aw... How bittersweet. Just beautiful. A very sad, sweet ending to a horrific tale.

I officially love your stuff!

Aw GOD! You're breaking my heart, here!

Are you shittin' me? Alex?!! Man -- I hope there's some way for the kid to come out of this alive!
GOD this story is suspenseful!!

Oh holy sweet GOD! I don't know why, but I thought the kid was going to live!... I actually gasped and clamped my hand over my mouth when I read this chapter.

I'm officially dubbing you the Queen of Horror. Seriously. *guh*

I feel like I need a calming glass of wine now...

Thanks .


Wow , this story is so great

You r so good at writing .

Woah, again

lol

THANKS for the sharing

AWESOME

Take care
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Damn. Another brilliant piece. Awesome. I really felt sorry for Alex. And of course, Dean. Man. I could only imagine the pain Dean felt when he pulled the meat hook out from his shoulder and breaking his collarbone along the way. And having one of his legs almost blasted off. 0_o

Keep it up~!

Nat.

I should be working right now, but this was a page turner. I love that way that you write Dean in this story, his snide comments and off-handed humor sound just like him.

Great story! (And that line about the stereo had me cracking up!)

I really enjoyed your story and wanted to let you know. I thought that the characterization was great and especially appreciated the differing POVs from chapter to chapter. Seeing in-depth into Sam's motivations was very interesting, and the way that you examined his need for normalcy was thoughtful. Thanks for sharing this story with us!

Great story! Poor Dean i don't think i've read a more brutal whumping before.

another really good story

EW!! EWEWEWEWEW!

*pause*

EW!

Your story was so beautiful that it brought me to tears. Alex was such a pure wonderful character that he was hard to say goodbye to.