Reviews for Plundered Hearts

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Giga Bytes7 2008-07-22 ch 17, anon.	abuseSo if this is after the story "Magic Knight Erina..." I was just wondering, Sora, how does your story "Magic Knight Erina" end? Why isn't it on this site anymore? How do they defeat Altair, Orion, and Artemis? And are Sirius and Sthertoth involved? And I'm guessing that Bomberman and Zhael never find out Erina's true identity...
Patinator 2008-05-28 ch 22,	abuseOkay... Chapter 20 was funny. Chapter 21 was weird. Chapter 22 was... Indescribable? XD
Patinator 2008-05-25 ch 19,	abuseThis was rather... Disturbing... o_o
Patinator 2008-03-05 ch 17,	abuseHeh-heh, that last bit's pretty funny. ^^ Great update(s).
Dantaron 2008-02-05 ch 16,	abuseDude, you sat down and wrote THIS in what, an hour or two? XD That's awesome. Really good concept here, with Mujoe and Mama (omg squee Jetterz appearance!) being friends with Ruk, it makes sense considering their line of work. You really captured the chibi sense nicely here - Mujoe's description of Lilith, the Higehige humming a funeral march (I lawl'd), and their reactions when Lilith walked in (which was really cute, btw - the shy thing was really nice ^_^). Mama was characterized well, with the whole throaty voice and vague, not-really-saying anything responses. XD "Let the bottle be your friend tonight", lolz. The heart-shaped smokering was a good touch, as well. XD I swear, is there anything you -can't- write? lolz, little black dress. ^_^ Very nice, Sora, as always. =D I'll be reading!
Dantaron 2008-02-05 ch 15,	abuseXD "I think I'll wrote a chapter of Plundered Hearts", and the next day I come home to just that. ^_^ You're such a writing beast, lolz. Good chapter you have, here. ^_^ I totally love the way you characterized Rukifellth here - swaggery, flippant, cocky and rude (top or bottom, l-o-l), but at the same time unexpectedly gentle. The way he just offhandedly treats Lilith with a kind of familiarity is awesome, and it's ubercute how she can't help but respond. ^_^ He's like Zelos, but with way more awesome and lacking the jerkface part. In terms of Lilith, you did well here, too. ^_^ You can kinda see her emotions and stuff trying to surface through the whole Azurite brainwashing, and it's rly cute (ie., ""Um..." Lilith bites her lip. "I have to go back to the Circle. Sorry." She grimaces when she realizes she's just seriously considered his offer.") Lilith being at reduced energy was kind of different, in that Ruk could actually gain the upperhand on her, so it was nice seeing the laser pistol in action. In general though, you can kinda start to see her wake up, so to speak, from the Azurite crap - comparing Ruk's hug to the cold way the Mother hugged her, and questioning not having any friendships (when you compare that to post-TSA, with being with Ruk and friends with B-man and all the Knights, she really gained a lot). My only critique is a minor couple - just that the part where Lilith thought she was going to be raped seemed a rather abrupt plunge into depression (not that you can really blame her), but it doesn't seem like her usual gung-ho asskickery to just give up like that - but on the flip side, with the Azurite and all, she might not have a whole lot of will to, you know, really care much. Secondly, her kind of massive falling head-of-heels with Rukifellth towards the end, like wanting to laugh or cry at the same time. If it's a love at first sight thing, or she was just swept off her feet, that might be kind of an explanation - but it was only the third time he's met her, right? That's awful short to fall in love the normal way, so to speak. ^__^ Good job with Rukifellth giving out all his information (I cracked a smile at his full name, lolz), and inviting Lilith to check him out (lol innuendo). That last touch in italics, the "seehimagain", was a good touch - interjecting character's thoughts suddenly and abruptly into the prose, uncontrollably almost - just as how real thoughts are, spontaneous like that. As always, I love your narrative style. ^_^ Third person, present tense - really makes for some vivid images and nice reading. ^_^ Another excellent PH chapter and contribution to Pirateshipping. As always, I'll be reading, Sora! =D
Patinator 2008-01-23 ch 14,	abuseI come to the Bomberman section, and find this. . . This, this. . . MASTERPIECE. I've hardly ever seen such good writing; grammar, spelling, anything else. Humor, romance, yet tense and serious chapters thrown in. I LOVE IT!
Post 2007-12-25 ch 14,	abuseGood chapter; from first bookend to last bookend. There's a Hell of a lot of Ruk-and-Lilith-flirting stories in your writings these days. Someone's heart all a-romantic? lolz Ruk is afraid of French Toast in the same way I'm afraid of faeries impregnating themselves on Kokiri boys' nocturnal emissions. :gets banned: And as an added note: It WAS teh Sora who uttered unto me that a "chibi-Ruk" would sound like James from Pokemon. That confessed, I wonder if a chibi-Lilith would sound like Blossom from Power Puff Girls. Buttercup? -Post
Post 2007-12-25 ch 13,	abuseRuk is a little black dress. I hope Lilith doesn't have dandruff. I guess Ruk could very well be a fashion freak--I mean, you DO draw him that way (the times when you do draw him clothed, that is). What's so loveable about Ruk anyways? XD Can people really be appreciated for how predictable and pathetic they are? Only the Lilith knows. Which reminds me, I've always imagined Ruk having the voice of James from Pokemon. Well, almost.
Dantaron 2007-12-11 ch 14,	abuseMihaele's dreadlocks. XD Lolz, eating Lilith. XD And, oy... >_> I drink milk straight from the jug. Does that mean I r barbarian? D: XDD @ Bombers will be bombers, and the explosion knocking over Ruk's milk. Cute chapter, Sora, like all your chibi-takes. ^_^ I'll be reading!
Dantaron 2007-11-15 ch 10,	abuseShort, yes, but sweet. ^_^ Very nice - you can practically see it as a single few snapshots of Lilith attacking Sthertoth, and him roaring as she does so. Poor Rukifellth. ^_^ You did manage to stuff in a fair amount of detail and info into such a small chapter, and a good scene of exactly what Lilith faced when she turned her back on Bomberman. --"I imagine you're just jealous because you've got no princess to save you from hell. After all, you kind of kicked her into the endless abyss."-- XD Ownt - best line evar. and, lolz @ the Wizard of Oz parody - the fact that it's totally out of place in a serious battle fic makes it even more hilarious --"I'll destroy you, my little pretty," he roared, "and your little universe too!"--. Can you imagine Sthertoth ever saying "pretty"? XDD And aww, cute @ protecting Ruk in the afterlife. ^_^;; except he's, you know, forever trapped in the hell of Sthertoth's mind. >_> Nonetheless, great chapter! ^_^; I can't remember what the original was, oy, but this is still pwnage. I'll be reading, as always. ^_^
Dantaron 2007-11-14 ch 13,	abuseHaha, aww, that was rly cute. ^_^ And ah, I see why you mentioned the aristocrat thing, now. =D Good angle on it, 'cause really, what an aristocrat wears is important. XD Nonetheless, this fact does not make it any less lolarious that Rukifellth is a total fashion h0r. >D Seriously though, good chapter, good establishment of backstory and a bit more of everyone's favourite soap opera couple in all their complexities. ^_^ XD @ drive-in closet and Rukifellth impersonation, too. Peons, lolz. And yet, you managed to wrap it up in a totally serious ending - if that change from fashion to discussing backgrounds was a little unexpected. ^_^ It worked, though, and that little black dress/always in style metaphor was rly cute. If only reality could be as perfect as Lilith/Rukifellth, eh? =D Excellent chapter, Sora. ^_^ Funny how you managed to write this while juggling sketches, NaNo, and FM, oy. ^_^;; I'll be reading!
Post 2007-10-14 ch 12,	abuseHatred means never having to say you're sorry. lol wut? -Post
Dantaron 2007-10-14 ch 12,	abuseROFL. XD Cute. That's exactly something Rukifellth would say, too - a flirty little tongue-in-cheek. XD Sadface at Lilith being all wrapped up in a cult. =( ^_^ Nonetheless, good chapter, Sora. =D Yay for Ruk/Lily!
AxisLyonheart516 2007-07-16 ch 11,	abuseY'know, no matter how short that was, I have to say, that was one of the most shocking moments in fanfiction I've read. Schmexy. ... I actually spit my soda all over my monitor after reading the first line. Good times people.

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