Reviews for Colonial Day Rewritten

Silwyna 2006-12-24 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed this very much. I wish it had ended like this on the show. The last sentene was perfect :)
yannik 2006-03-09 ch 1,	abuseI like it :). Well, apart from "‘Yes, sir’. He would have saluted". The stick-up-his-** Apollo wouldn't do that, see HE outranks HER ;), and making jokes of military is not an option ;).
ShippyChick 2006-03-08 ch 1,	abuseA much better way to end that show. Nice job!
Tracyj23 2006-03-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was really sweet actually. Not too sappy (like some of us write!) but believable. Wish it would have happened that way. Good first story - I've really enjoyed your poetry thus far and I'm prepared to enjoy many more stories. :)
not falling in love 2006-03-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseHm. I have a feeling I've read that before... Beautiful. Lovely. Mwah. Ciao HOMEWORK time