this is pretty good even thou ive never heard of slayers.This is to the authors-are one of u or u slashgirl from chat?Later Dayz

you have to finish it pllllease!I'm hocked but it does need more X/L kissing parts ehehehe

Wow I really like this alot so far...get the next part out soon, please? I really like it _

Nice story, continue please.

oh, you evil person. such a good story, such a good chapter, and you leave it there! how unjust!

Oro.

Y-you... left off there? How could you! You must continue! I demand it! BTW- This is great!

Keep writing, this is story's good! Pair off Lina and Xelloss.

This is good. please, keep writing.

...if you kept everyone in character, I'd say you made Milgazia as far away from character as is possible. Xelloss was cute and funny though.

KAWAII! _ One of the cutest slayers fic I've read...not that I've read a lot of them -_-; You just have to finish it! PLEASE! *looks at you with big bright puppy eyes*

Hehe! Funny.

What an interesting story! You have to finnish it! please, please!

I like what I'm reading so far (its only up to a very short chapter3) its fun and articulate. I'm not catching a bizillion mispellings or drowning in atrocious grammar. She's kept everyone in character thus far and seems, all in all, to be doing an excellent job of it.

OHHHHHHH! THAT WAS SOOOOOO KAWAII! Please write more!