you know what song works well with this story of danny at least animal I have become love that song.

I managed not to cry until I read that ending. OMG IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL *sniffweephiccup*

A brilliant fic all around.

This is great.

You capture Valerie's style well and everyone is in character. This could actually be what happened.

Love the stories! This is awesome... but so emotional... *sobs*

Whoa. This chapter is AMAZING! (not that the whole fic isn't amazing...) It's so well-done, so in-charater... so explanitory! Think about it! You fill in ALL the pieces that were missing from the actual episode PERFECTLY! Multitude of kudos to you, dude!

Tie-dyed Trickster

Yah, I like what happened with Paulina. Did in Anathema, do in this one! I've finished Anathema (the only thing I would have changed would be at the end adding a comment like 'Memo to self: don't crash into side of Fenton Thermos face first', because that was the last thing we saw at the end of the episode. But, then, I like adding quircks like that to stuff - I don't do serious fanfic very well. When it comes to fanfic, I write humor.) I'm really looking forward to reading Benediction after I finish Jeramiad (I even vaguely knew what a Jeramiad was BEFORE I read the discription. 'Vaguely' being the key word, we didn't cover them very much in English class.) This is such a cool series and since you wrote them, that must mean YOU are such a cool writer! YAY! (glomps writer) YOU ROCK!

Tie-dyed Trickster

And now for my review of this story, after being distracted by rewatching TUE...

Excellent story, and I especially love the new maturity you gave Paulina. The tidbit with Undergrowth in this timeline is a great tie-in with the other one. And it's kind of funny how you didn't see Vlad as able to give Danny a second chance. I love Valerie stories, and this one is definitely one of my top favorites. Yay for good stories!

I think this trilogy-chapter arc at the end was brilliant. All the world's a stage and the people players. Or something like that. :) Eh, I'll see you when you start the last story. See you then!

Awesome! Looking forward to Indemnification!

Hello! Tis me, Tor! I changed my username because... Because I could! Yay!

Anyways, I thought this chapter was a little slow, but besides that, I thought it was good. I hope you update soon!

~ Tor

Wow great story, in fact all ur DP 1's a great, this is gonna b a stupid q but ive actually been wonderin.

Did Dan destroy like the whole world or just amity park?

I know i shud know the answer but in contradicts itself,like in Chapter 17 it was written vlad pain for a bunch of improvements to the city, which suggests that people outside of amity park exist, but other facts like dan being who he is suggests that he wouldnt just hang around that general area (and the ghost zone) for 10 years.

If anyone can answer this pls tell me, it will be well appreciated

XD Cute... Paulina was awesome this whole chapter. :giggle: Danny's just adorable as usual. Can't wait for what's to come!

Hm. Adding chapters to a complete story, eh? Good thing I have you on author alert. If you want a laugh, go ready my *Letters to the Authors.* You'll like Dan's letter. (HINT, HINT) See you next chapter of this or *Indemnification*. See ya!

Wow. That was-wow. And how Valerie...wow. Great story.

Beans

Ah, I was wondering when this would be put up. A bit of anticipation for it, you see. Anyway, welcome backs aside, its story reviewing time.

A bridging arch, hm? Interesting... and Indemnification is so different things must be arched? Well well, that has drawn my attention.
The idea of the patrolers who were so hardworking against spirits would turn into them is not something I expected, personally. Though it does make sense, quite a bit of sense.

I shall wait with baited breath.