“No, I wasn’t, that was an slow blink!”
HA! I loved that part, I can see Tomo actually coming up with that excuse in the anime xD
Good work and update soon!

wonderful and sweet and very in character! Despite the odd grammer mistake it was very well written probably the best tomo/yomi fic i have came across.

Aw, so cute. (Hooray Toyomi!) Good Job on this fic. I luffs it^_^

Gah it wouldn't let me review chapter three twice.

Oh well.

GUESS WHAT I WAS READING TONIGHT ;D THAT'S RIGHT, YOUR FANFIC, MUCHACHA.

WHEN'RE YOU WRITING THAT SMUT SCENE, EH? EH? EH?

Plays out pretty much the way I think it would if Tomo were to come out of the Closet. I won't lie, it doesn't present anything different about how it unfolds. The fact of the matter is you made it work. May not be the most original idea or original way for the idea to unfold, but it works, so I like it.

A really nice story so far! I am looking forward to the next chapter.

well,well leave us all hanging in a cloud of suspence. UPDATE...please.

Wow! That was really good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Best chapter so far. The reason have already been stated.

Good Job! I really like this! You did everything just right.

Yo, I told you I'd review! (It's 1:30 am. That has nothing to do with this though.)

You must continue this right away because it is awesome! And props for keeping them in character, which I personally think is really hard to do, especially Tomo. Because you managed to have her in this romantic situation and still be Tomo, and for that you deserve a prize. ...It's just so cute. I love it. XD

Wow. I don't like yuri stuff, but DAMN! I'm hooked! ((That's a compliment... xD)) Keep writing. I'm waiting! Yay!

Thank you for keeping them so much in character. Especially with Tomo's personality it should be hard, but I liked the result. The way Yomi points out Tomo's sudden concern and temporary change works nice.
Very good one, this chapter. Realistic since both of them are confused and akward like most teenagers in such situation can be. The parts that switch to Yomi's perspective were a nice touch. I was afraid it would end up too sentimental -as scenes about confessions and feelings tend to be- but fortunately it didn't.

this story is getting pretty good. nice use of words and very interesting phraises. i hope things get evan much more intence. keep up on the good work. oh and type fast! :)

love it love it love it! Fave pairing ever here! ^u^
Keep going please please please! xD

~Sista