aww, love how you bring AL out. it's really nice

I love this story. i always wanted Claire and Ana to have a conversation. that was great.

This is great! Ana-Lucia and Claire are two of my favourite characters, and for them to interact at all, even in a fanfic, is really great for me.

You kept them beautifully in character. I like how Ana expressed concern for Aaron- it's odd and yet somehow very fitting that a person like her could have a maternal side to them, isn't it?

I am adding this to my Favourites list, and if I can remember to, I will probably pimp it on my Livejournal tonight (my username is chilipeppasbaby). This fic is really well-written. Excellent work!

Hey pretty good. The Ana and Claire stayed within character. I actually read the whole thing, and i dont usually. Good job!

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I like this story a lot. So many characterize Ana as the bad girl, but I like her. Awesome job. I'd like to see it continued maybe?