That made me cry and cry and cry. I'm just sorry my mum had to walk in the room at the time.

Beautiful story.

Beautiful. SO poetic and descriptive, in few words. It rings true.

I admire the simplicity of this piece, the way it tells so much in such a short amount of time. Very well done, I'm very impressed.

Great beginnings and so true. Keep up the good work...Mike

I liked this. So exactly the way the story goes. He wanted to be free but could never be. So often these stories deviate too much but this was right on. Well done.

Steve

Aw... how tragic. I liked it!