 insaneoreo 2009-09-21 . chapter 16WRITE MORE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND FORCE YOU! |
 Miyagi-Chan 2009-05-29 . chapter 16omg i love it! Grr! you got to finish it! or update please?! |
 Pheonocia 2008-08-01 . chapter 16write more! its so fun! |
 Pheonocia 2008-08-01 . chapter 8im so glad you added FFXII I love that one, it's my fav! thanks again! |
 Abyss of Essence 2008-06-07 . chapter 16I've been reading this fic of yours and the rest of your fics for awhile and...well...Yeah, not to be rude but you should re-write this. From Chapter 1 all the way to the end. Your rushing very quickly and jumping around with absolutely little to no background or build up of relationships. This isn't a flame I'm just trying to give you some constructive critizisim. Anyway I hope you'll take my words into consideration, either way I'll still read.
-Shinigami's Shadow. |
 Kokoroitai 2008-04-13 . chapter 16*le gasp* omg! T_T i couldn't hate Sephiroth or Seifer anymore at the moment... they are so mean! |
 L Lexuran 2008-04-11 . chapter 16Ahh, darkness falls on the happy couple... BUT...
"Sephiroth looked Seifer up and down and shrugged. “Where do you want to do it?” I think that was the highlight of the last 5 minutes. lol |
 L Lexuran 2008-04-11 . chapter 15"Sephiroth made a noise of triumph on the other end and Kadaj yelled something in Italian." One of the best lines ever! And I don't seem to know why... lol |
 vincents1lover 2008-04-09 . chapter 16*crys with cloud* nose!!SEIFER U JERKY-BACON!!HOW COULD U U JERK!!*sob*!!REMEMBER TO UPDATE AGAIN SOON PELASE!XD |
 beisel76 2008-03-04 . chapter 15 I love the romeo and Juliet story, it's absolutely awesome. I put it on my favorite list. And yes I did CATCH THE VEGGIE TALES REFERANCE. SHWET WORK! |
 DreamFreak336 2008-02-19 . chapter 15very nice! very nice! |
 vincents1lover 2008-02-18 . chapter 15OMG WHEN R U GONNA UPDATE! I LVOE IT!! |
 vincents1lover 2008-02-18 . chapter 12omg i'm think i'm ahving an sezure of excitement! |
 vincents1lover 2008-02-18 . chapter 11omg ur such an asome fanfic writer! I"M SO HAPPY!! |
 vincents1lover 2008-02-18 . chapter 7ohh i think i'm in lvoe...with this fanfiction! |