Reviews for Halo: Guardian of the Luminous Key

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SEATTLESTEELERSFAN 2007-09-22 ch 8,	abuseI've read all your work and you are one of my favorite authors out there. I'm glad you've stayed with this for as long as you have. by the way, Rawlings is a b* and I'm glad you killed her. Hope you keep writing. SEATTLESTEELERSFAN
Tremble Wolf 2006-12-12 ch 1,	abusePretty good... except I do have a few notes. The Egyptians didn't have angels in their religion. Angels are in the Judaism and Christianity. They are the servants of God, not 'the gods'. Otherwise it was a good chapter, just a few things that wouldn't really work out.
corthis 2006-11-30 ch 8,	abuseSighs loudly. why did you have to do that. it would have been better if you had just left it at the death of elena but you had to continue it just to make it annoying. now i won't be able to wait till the thrid book. just one thing, something that i really want to see is the grunts going natural again and all of them running on all fours again. oh and another thing you got something wrong but i didn't realise it till now. Grunts have feet not hooves. Last thing is it ok if i use the mirraford in a story, i know that you have let other people use it and i want to use them aswell. maybe you should send a message to bungie and Microsoft game Studios telling them to read one of your stories and seeing if they can put the mirraford into one of the next Halo games.
freelancer92 2006-10-19 ch 8,	abusenice, can't wait till the thrid book.
Mark 2006-09-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is the best halo fandic I have read.
slayer123bio 2006-08-16 ch 1,	abusegreat, awesome, oh are u a guy or a girl and also when are u on xbox live, I'm slayer123bio on xbox live, and wat rank are u.
Lecter42 2006-08-04 ch 8,	abuseWell... that would explain some of the more impressive of Kellys traits. IE.. being the best sprinter of all of the spartans. And it would be in line with the thought of all of the Spartans being special (apart from the enhancements ect.) a idea promulgated by yourself and others and implied by Bungie. That would lead to the idea though that perhaps Kelly could become the greatest of the spartan warriors... given the right circumstances of course. We will see. Looking forward to whatever side stories you come up with between now and Halo 3s release. So until then, great stuff and happy hunting.
Lai Tasha 2006-08-02 ch 8,	abuseThat was awesome soulguard. I have literally run out of words to describe how much I enjoyed that story. You have done it again. Amazed us, Shocked us, Twisted the tale but always kept the outcome believable. There are very few authors that I know that have engrossed me so wholely in a story. You have kept me so entralled I am late for a soccer match. Bye.
soulguard 2006-08-02 ch 8,	abuseUpdate: Small change in dialog. Eighteen Months changed to seven. Thanks for the pointer, Dldaddy.
dldaddy 2006-08-02 ch 8,	abuseThank you for the great story. I love how everything in your stories seem to wrap and weave with each other. A couple of things about Kelly. Being a father of an 18 month old, I really related to Tiffany's unwillingness to let her go. I did have one problem with some of the dialog. You state that Kelly was able to "speak simple words at eighteen months". I wanted to note that this is actually quite normal for a child of that age, in fact it can concern doctors if they aren't. Doesn't really effect the story any, but wanted to point that out. Can't wait for the next book!
xMShadow icex 2006-08-02 ch 7,	abusekick ** man! i love your stories!
firebendingguy 2006-07-30 ch 7,	abuseThis is one of the most original,well written and gripping storys ive read on so far. I wish i could write as good as you oh well For the honor of the Mirratord
Lecter42 2006-07-26 ch 7,	abuseSo Elena is still alive... or at least survived for the moment. So does that mean that the ark will be hidden again, or rather moved again? And will the pure lineage of the Reclaimers continue? Lots of ways that you could go with this. Also have to wonder how long Narmer will be able to turn down the prestige and power that would go with being the next headmaster. Lastly though, are you going to wrap this story up and start another or is the "start of a new" going to be just a continuation of this story? Good work as always, looking forward to more.
dldaddy 2006-07-26 ch 7, anon.	abuseNice work. I will regret saying this if you go a different way, but I am glad Elena still seems to be alive. Would Narmer not want Michael dead as well? It seems like him being alive would leave room for another conflict, which he doesn't seem to want. Anyway, enough thinking out loud. Can't wait for the finale!
Matt 2006-07-21 ch 6, anon.	abuseSoulguard awesome work. love how you bring everything together from your past and present stories. the whole struggle between the reclaimers and watchmen is epic. might want to describe your surroundings a little more. longer wouldn't be bad either but all in all i would say that this is some of your best work. keep it up. I've read all your halo stories and look forward to reading more.

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