this was a very sweet, well done story.

God don't we all want love like that. I read and re-read your stuff. :)

"What's got you smiling so bright, Beautiful?”

As if he doesn't know. "It's because I found my way back to you."

Naughty, Naughty. Great work.

So, I've begun going through the archive that is your profile. I have only one regret: Why, oh why, did I not start this addiction sooner?

You have a wonderful way with words, and write the Tommy/Kim relationship so playfully and sweet, it just kills me sometimes. Once again, your dialogue is very natural.

I have to admit, I have a personal thing against first-person stories. I've found that it's just very hard to pull off properly. I have aboslutely nothing against this one, though. The writing isn't too much of a 'stream of consciousness' style that it throws me off, and you still manage to somehow describe things well enough that I don't feel like I'm missing anything at all.

Definitely one of my favorites. :)

Beautiful. Just...beautiful. I loved it. It was hilarious, I actually laughed out loud a couple of times. This is one of the best Tommy/Kim fanfics I've found so far. Thank you for your excellent writing. Keep up the good work!

Oh my God! I smiled throughout the entire story. This was so sweet and romantic, I've gotta read it again right now!

Fantastic. This had me wearing a goofy smile through the whole thing. Your writting is amazing. I look forward to all your future fics!

I love this it's so cute. I want more stories like this. I would like a sequel but you said no so i guess it is a no. Please if you change your mind i would like a sequel. Keep up the good work.

That was so romantic! I also laughed my ass off, just to tell you.

GREAT STORY!

My God, you always write them so beautifully. Kim's voice was so clear and Tommy seen through Kim's eyes was amazing. I loved the journey, the sadness, the nervousness (which is so freakin true to life), all of the events that occured in their journey to each other. Sigh. I loved it.

Great Story!

this story was great. you are a gifted writer!

Leaves me with a ping in my heart. *sigh*

OMG, I absolutely am in love with this story! I really like the ones that show their relationship with each other in the future and GAH, it left me speechless!

I LOVE THIS! and why not a sequel u could be nice and do one please im begging here.