Hello. It's an excellent story that you've written so keep writing the next chapters, please.

PLZ update soon OK!

Ok, so they rescued Botan and the girls, who all apparently has spiritual powers. How did that happen or they just target girls with spiritual powers? Wow, Kurama is really not calm and cool anymore when it deals with Botan. He usually won't get injured that easily and he's always be observant and calculating during fights. So Maya in this fic also has spiritual powers, and was Kurama able to save her before the building collapsed? Actually, now they've saved Botan, but what is goin on? Who's this Akuen lord, and where is he? Is he the main antagonist? I'm guessin ur want to keep it a mystery until later. Well, then hope to hear from u soon. Ja ne!

WOW! this was quite an amazing chapter. there was so much action and so much excitement that i just couldn't stop reading. i can't wait to see what happens in chapter six!

Maya...that's the person in the seventh YYH book, huh...the one Kurama erased the memories of? I think? Update soon, please!

this chapter was very well written. i can see that chapter 5 is looking to be a very interesting chapter!

ps. i'm sorry that i didn't leave a review sooner. my family and i were visiting relatives for a month in haiti.

Who? She must be one of Kurama's classmate or fans to know his human name, which means it's bad cuz she wasn't suppose to know he's not human. A bunch of girls...hmm...so what do they want with a bunch of girls? Human or not cuz Botan's not human or maybe they've mistaken her for a human. Man, Kurama has got it bad if this was enough to affect the overly calm fox, what will happen to him if something did happen to Botan. He poked at Hiei's most loathing taboo (forbidden child) and most painful memory. He deserved that wound cuz he basically sprinkled salt on Hiei's wanting-to-forget-invisible wound. Anyways, guess they've found the right place, just the wrong room. So what's gonna happen now? Can't wait for more!

Gah! who says his ningen name?

wow..I didn't expected it to be ended in that manner..but it was really good..GO for KB..hehe

and the strife between kurama and hiei? a little too serious but just good..hope you can add a little homour.._

0_0* kurama and hiei fighting? woah kurama did loose it but update soon!

this was so different and so good. i liked this. please add more soon.

AWSOMENESS TO THE EXTREME! This is uber kool, and you must update as soon as possible_. Great job so far

ElfRanger

This is a great story but i've been waiting and so far there is no sign of a ending. Please Please Finish. I am patientley waiting.

wa..please do continue..I don't have a tongue of sugar but I appreciate this fic!

Poor Botan, how will Kurama ever save her? I wonder why she was taken along with the other women? please update soon