 altrealitylover 7/20/11 . chapter 1Nice weaving together of the worlds of Ranma and Sailor Moon. The author does a good job of putting in some familiar secondary characters, but not letting the plot get too thin by trying to put all of them into the storyline. The fight scenes are easy to follow and well choreographed. Characters act in a natural, believable way, though I would have liked to see more reactions to Ranma’s curse from the Sailor Senshi. The real shining point of the story for me is Ranma’s relationship with Akane and Akane’s maturing personality. She probably comes out as the most improved character in this story. |
 Blackdex 5/27/06 . chapter 1Bravo, I enjoyed every moment of this, you actually managed to peg Ranma as a senshi, and do it fluidly, no unnecessary OOCs, no "great turmoil" in which an older Ranma reemerges, its just Ranma, doing what he always does, anything he can to help the weak. Its nice see a Ranma-Akane piece that really works, most just go, well, wrong. I also like how you avoided unnecessary confrontations with the past NWC, their were a few Ryoga Cameos, but their expected, i mean, its a mainstay in the magna to switch to him for a few scenes. On to the parts I didn’t like. You put the whole book in one chapter, boo. Its length was about as low as i can take without complaint and the one and only chapter was roughly what i expected, maybe a little longer than normal, but nothing to complain about. but i do think you could have split it, two chapters at least, three at most. I still read it in one sitting, which is what i like to time it out to, but it was close. I literally could not stop reading this piece, I missed lunch, and my stomach is getting even with me. well, that it for now, i want to see where this story goes, and i noticed its continued by a different author, so I am going to try and hope for the best (read the other authors work as well, none of the Sailor Ranko though) |